Everybody Wants To Rule The World
By NeroMatches
That night, under this solid mess of stars
she told me, the world we have
was sitting by the silken roots of her palms.
her lips tremble and shake with every word
And she shivers as she strips her jacket off.
"It's freezing" I whispered. "Put it back on"
She took out her pack of cigarettes
And neared her mouth against my ear, and replied,
"This would keep me warm".
"Of course" I told her, "of course."
She puffs the nicotine out with smiles
And mercury sweat drops trickle down her spine.
--you see, breath left my lungs before i could speak--
"True." she muttered.
"True?" I asked her.
"Yes. True. It's true."
I did not understand her.
Her lips were not anymore trembling
But dried out in that freezing night.
"What is?"
"You."
"I?"
"You. True. You are true."
"Of course."
She took out another stick and lit it with her butane lighter.
Her hands were whiter than snow.
"I'll have the world someday you know."
"Yes, I do."
She stretches out and her eyes follow mine.
I was speechless.
"I love you." she told me.
And I told her I loved her too.
But she shook her head, and took my hand
And cradled her cheek on it.
"Not as much as I do."
Under this solid mess of stars,
I told her I had the world by the roots of my palms.
It was her.
Comments on "Everybody Wants To Rule The World"
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful. There's a captivating sense of mystique here that really comes through- especially in the second stanza.
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On Monday, October 12, 2009, skully
(42) wrote:
so real. I really feel i was there that night.....beautifully written
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On Sunday, February 18, 2007, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
A tender moment captured beautifully..Much love to you, Jules!
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On Sunday, July 16, 2006, blake
(33) wrote:
this is divine
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A former member wrote:
this writing is exquisitely secretive, almost enchanting in a most captivating way. it teased my mind throughout, wanting to see more, and know more. this is beautiful in an inexplicable way.
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On Saturday, March 11, 2006, Grey Lies
(185) wrote:
a fool's love?...to place the world on a silver platter? no true love where one should die for the other. the whole world placed upon a silver platter encrusted with diamonds. inevitable demises linger. simple, stunning, beautiful.
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On Monday, March 6, 2006, Guillotine
(168) wrote:
a beautiful tale... youve woven it with great subtelty and grace....
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A former member wrote:
wow, this is so powerfully exposing: the very subtlety of tenderness is presented unmistakably...that which is always sought, so inevitably overlooked, and nearly impossible to express has been made explicit by you
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On Friday, February 24, 2006, Army Barbie
(316) wrote:
...I've told you I loved you before haven't I? If not I'm telling you now. I am so so glad you're back. And even happier this is reposted, I've always loved this piece
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On Tuesday, February 28, 2006, NeroMatches
(49) wrote:
hmmm. you did. but i wouldnt mind if you say it over and over courtney. haha.
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On Wednesday, February 22, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Dude. What can I say. Moments like this are what keeps me sane. You captured it... perfect. I'm glad you reposted this. This is gold. Pure gold.
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On Wednesday, February 22, 2006, blake
(33) wrote:
this was absolutely perfect, cleverly titled. she must have loved this.
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A former member wrote:
*sigh* ..I remember this one.. and.. I cannot say exactly what gives these words such majesty except, perhaps, as Bethany said, their simple truth.. I'm as entranced now as I was when I first read them. This is complex on a new level. Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
thank you so much for re-posting this..i loved it then, and i love it now..i can't pinpoint what it is exactly that i adore about this piece..maybe it's the refreshing honesty, the conversation in such beautiful prose, the lovely images..
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A former member wrote:
but whenever i read this, i tear up..just the way it's constructed, and the ending is one of the most romantic couple of lines i've ever read. this piece shines so tenderly, i can picture two lovers gazing at the stars, enthralled by each other..
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A former member wrote:
this tells such a brief, gorgeous story, wound up so perfectly like a spring, then the ending sort of brings it all together. not a word is used out of place here, everything is woven into bits of diamond sky and gentle stars..
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A former member wrote:
you've an amazing talent, and i can't tell you enough how glad i am that you are back. thank you again for re-posting, this is so magnificent. i am completly enthralled. ~bethany
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On Tuesday, February 28, 2006, NeroMatches
(49) wrote:
thank you bethany. you have always touched me with your comments. much love.