Moon Lady Of Phoenix Snow

By carlosjackal

Virgins in foliage with blood on jungle teeth
Brush the vines as paint turns to sand
Spots on eyes raining embers into vision
Sharp flowers abstract everyday faces

Deserts smothered in snow and
An orangutan on an ice cap

Moon lady of phoenix snow
Calm guide in this insanity show
Turmoil swirls in your wild irises
Through breakdown, wisdom gained

Your intellect unfurling along stringed vibrations
11-dimensional beauty greater than every theory of god
Spherical notes shaped perfectly
Like secrets
Into the curve of your palm

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Published on Friday, April 11, 2008. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "Moon Lady Of Phoenix Snow"

On Saturday, September 16, 2017, Mute Serenade (445) wrote:

Nimue nailed it... This imagery is abstract in and of itself. The mosaic of a story left collected in palms :)
A former member wrote: "11 dimensional beauty"? I can only imagine, friend. This is a very worthy Poem Of The Day. The imagery in this is stunning, and the words just captivate the reader in ways that cannot be explained. Very well done, babe. Queen Reb:).
On Friday, September 11, 2015, Nimue44 (296) wrote:

Fantastic, yet somehow disorienting... The imagery is awesome, yet indeed abstract! The final stanza left me with the yearning for something, the feeling of watching a pendulum come and go, maybe... Wow.
On Tuesday, July 22, 2014, BetaWolfinVA (795) wrote:

beautiful words
On Friday, January 14, 2011, Corinthian (309) wrote:

moon lady of phoenix snow makes me think of my mother ...beautiful , creative gorgeous writing
A former member wrote: lol, re-read it. still love it. realized it was a day after my birthday. ^_^ awesome. lol
On Friday, May 16, 2008, insanemonroe (16) wrote:

tis good ^^) me like lol-monroe*
On Sunday, April 20, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1246) wrote:

Monkeys fit in everywhere. Good write man. I'll make sure to re-read it and re-comemnt
On Friday, October 2, 2015, carlosjackal (3016) wrote:

Still waiting..
On Sunday, November 16, 2008, carlosjackal (3016) wrote:

Come back!!!
On Friday, May 30, 2008, carlosjackal (3016) wrote:

I'm still waiting for the re-comment :P ....and a new write from you :) -Carl
On Saturday, April 12, 2008, ColourGod (44) wrote:

She plucked the strings of my heart from the very first line's start. Fantasy under the influence of science. She tastes my tongue sweet in my mouth.
A former member wrote: this is wonderful...every line holds strength and beauty.
A former member wrote: this really reminds me of a book i read, though i cannot recall the title off of my noggin....something about 'nam survivors and their traipse through sanity and salvation. . .. the reckoning? i think. .. . but hard.splendid stuff. ness
On Friday, April 11, 2008, elisa (1616) wrote:

truly a vision with a real touch... you really grabbed ahold of a beautiful image ... i'm not done with this yet:)
On Friday, April 11, 2008, Aunty Depressant (434) wrote:

*loses gravitons to this universe...I might have to paint this.
A former member wrote: Pivotal imagery. Slayer of an opening line leads to a superb execution. This is fucking ace poetry. Damn you, Carl. You always make me swear in comments. Hahaha.
A former member wrote: I loves this.../Your intellect unfurling along stringed vibrations/ oh the cello popped in my head when i read that ^_^