Indulgence
By Alchemist
Once
upon a vapid musing, I laid listening to rapid music.
A flow of gothic fusion, refusing the lull of that to reuse it.
This is the great illusion, a hero to them of mass confusion.
The myth and curse of heroin, a high with little need of intrusion.
Introducing the conclusion, scarecrow
thin self-satisfied skeleton.
Because
the ego needs no bone with marrow in.
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Copyright 2012 Alchemist
Published on Thursday, August 16, 2012.
Filed under: "Structured" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Indulgence"
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On Tuesday, October 9, 2012, Star
(879) wrote:
oh wow, the rhyming on this one is excellent at its finest, with your voice in this, is fantastic, and yes please do more (:
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On Tuesday, October 9, 2012, Poe Etiquette
(124) wrote:
"A flow of gothic fusion, refusing the lull of that to reuse it." ha. loved that. for some reason the flow and style brought to mind, Red Hot Chili Peppers. im sure this wasnt about them but it sounded like the way their music is written. thanks
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On Friday, August 17, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
The ego needs only the plaudits of the plebescite, profoundly perfect!
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On Thursday, August 16, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
This was really fun to read. This style works well with your voice. I hope you do more - XXOO
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On Thursday, August 16, 2012, Maladroit
(198) wrote:
Last line is a killer... But I did not particularly want it to end, so I read it again,
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A former member wrote:
Excellent rhythm, my man.