Indulgence

By Alchemist





                        Once upon a vapid musing, I laid listening to rapid music.
                         A flow of gothic fusion, refusing the lull of that to reuse it.
                       This is the great illusion, a hero to them of mass confusion.
                   The myth and curse of heroin, a high with little need of intrusion.
                    Introducing the conclusion, scarecrow thin self-satisfied skeleton.
                                 Because the ego needs no bone with marrow in.






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Copyright 2012 Alchemist
Published on Thursday, August 16, 2012.     Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"
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  • Star On Tuesday, October 9, 2012, Star (879)By person wrote:

    oh wow, the rhyming on this one is excellent at its finest, with your voice in this, is fantastic, and yes please do more (:

  • Poe Etiquette On Tuesday, October 9, 2012, Poe Etiquette (124)By person wrote:

    "A flow of gothic fusion, refusing the lull of that to reuse it." ha. loved that. for some reason the flow and style brought to mind, Red Hot Chili Peppers. im sure this wasnt about them but it sounded like the way their music is written. thanks

  • dwells On Friday, August 17, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    The ego needs only the plaudits of the plebescite, profoundly perfect!

  • Nehema On Thursday, August 16, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    This was really fun to read. This style works well with your voice. I hope you do more - XXOO Scholar

  • Maladroit On Thursday, August 16, 2012, Maladroit (198)By person wrote:

    Last line is a killer... But I did not particularly want it to end, so I read it again,

  • A former member wrote: Excellent rhythm, my man.

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