Colt 45 1911

By Nehema



I love it when you use me 
When you bring me out to play 
You handle me so expertly 
Todays is my favorite day  

The strength in your hand excites me 
When you take me from my holster 
You grip me so tightly 
Your courage I bolster  

Eight and a quarter inches 
My cold steel frame 
Your warm touch quenches 
My lust for you to take aim   

Holding me steady 
You look right through me 
Both of us ready 
The target you see clearly   

Thrilled by your touch 
Your finger on my trigger 
I adore you so much 
Eagerness growing bigger   

Your squeeze like a kiss 
I erupt in ecstasy 
My kick is pure bliss 
You always pleasure me   

Seven rounds are hardly adequate  
Extra magazines you bring 
Thrusting in a new clip, so intimate 
I'm ready now to sing   

We spend this time together 
It's never long enough 
Soon you'll put me back in leather 
Then comes my favorite stuff   

Back home you lay me down 
Lovingly you clean me 
Check the safety is on 
Make sure the chambers empty   

Cleaning patches, toothbrush 
Lubricant oil and grease 
Taking your time, there is no rush 
You take me apart, piece by piece   

Starting with my slide 
Spray in a little oil 
Gentle scrub with the toothbrush 
Removes the powder and soil   

Never stingy with cleaning patches 
You rub and polish me smooth 
Careful to not allow scratches 
Never forgetting my grooves   

Extra oil on your fingers 
You use to massage my little pieces 
Your gentle touch lingers  
While my ecstasy increases  

All cleaned and put back together 
Time for you to store me away 
Until our next endeavor 
I'll wait patiently for that day   

Your tender care guarantees 
I'll never lock up, miss fire  
Jam or fail to please  
Your gratification, my only desire 

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Copyright 2012 Robyn Layne
Published on Saturday, June 2, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

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  • Sean Mc Shane On Wednesday, July 31, 2013, Sean Mc Shane (646)By person wrote:

    Nice one N. The love for the gun is always strong. Some times more than others. Awesome. Til next time -

  • A former member wrote: SMH SMH ... HAHA

  • A former member wrote: this brings to mind a saying of pure truth " Today you are the bullet fired from the weapon, in turn making you the weapon. You will make no distinction between practice and war. You will only hit the mark and hit it with the force you have been given."

  • Ravenblade On Friday, March 1, 2013, Ravenblade (323)By person wrote:

    Nicely portrayed...I would not trade my 1911 for much...if this is how you write it, I wonder the stories my Kimber tells the other guns....

  • haunted On Monday, December 3, 2012, haunted (1189)By person wrote:

    what an erotic way to spend time with a gun. you should check to see if they have colt condoms, just in case he isnt shooting blanks. lol...very cool poem and your flow just slides right off the tongue. awesome robyn!

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Monday, August 6, 2012, xZombie Poptartzx (484)By person wrote:

    I don't know much about the colt45 ... but it kind of made me want one ;p Awesome write ♥

  • Definit On Wednesday, June 13, 2012, Definit (123)By person wrote:

    A great tribute to an awesome piece of hardware :) Outstanding metaphor throughout this piece. Sexy in its delivery like this poem takes on a mind of its own. Good one :)

  • A former member wrote: Very nice. Exciting and calming all at once. I love the tempo. Rolled off my tongue like honey.

  • Chaos God On Tuesday, June 12, 2012, Chaos God (521)By person wrote:

    Still So Hott, I Can Hardly Handle :P

  • MySoulBare On Saturday, June 9, 2012, MySoulBare (14)By person wrote:

    Omg! You are amazing! Why are you not published? The world needs to hear you!

  • Nehema On Saturday, June 9, 2012, Nehema (1257)By person wrote:

    I am, on darkpoetry.com ;) Thanks for the compliment, my ego is smiling. Thanks for reading and commenting, glad you enjoyed this - XXOO Scholar

  • Alchemist On Thursday, June 7, 2012, Alchemist (860)By person wrote:

    My favorite gun, this is hot. But she is a high priced whore, lol.

  • Nehema On Thursday, June 7, 2012, Nehema (1257)By person wrote:

    The best ones are! Thanks for reading & commenting. You have good taste in guns - XXOO Scholar

  • revlis On Monday, June 4, 2012, revlis (119)By person wrote:

    "Your squeeze like a kiss I erupt in ecstasy My kick is pure bliss You always pleasure me " perfect! perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you have me screaming at the top of my voice..... Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! give me more of this!!!!!!!!!!! i am so happy i know you

  • Nehema On Monday, June 4, 2012, Nehema (1257)By person wrote:

    Superman, you will be my undoing. I believe that is the highest compliment I've received ever. Your work is stimulating and real, glad to know you too - XXOO Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, June 3, 2012, FadedBlues (2938)By person wrote:

    ...spoken by an expert in the arts of gunplay & poetics...very masterful work.

  • Nehema On Sunday, June 3, 2012, Nehema (1257)By person wrote:

    Ha ha, I WISH! I accept the compliment tho & I thank you, much appreciated! Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Sunday, June 3, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (646)By person wrote:

    Awesome write, R. I love the role reversal of gun love here. Excellent all the way. Til next time -

  • Nehema On Sunday, June 3, 2012, Nehema (1257)By person wrote:

    Thanks for the comment Sean - I was hoping you'd like it since you obviously know how to handle a piece, by your picture I mean... lol - XXOO Scholar

  • dwells On Sunday, June 3, 2012, dwells (5703)By person wrote:

    AH HA Ha ha etc. this was great! You are indeed a gifted poetess and beyond a doubt, you intimately know your subject matter, cheers Robyn!

  • Nehema On Sunday, June 3, 2012, Nehema (1257)By person wrote:

    Love you dwells, I'll be writing a little something for you before long - ideas stewing, not yet, not yet - but soon Scholar

  • Chaos God On Sunday, June 3, 2012, Chaos God (521)By person wrote:

    Sweltering In Here All Of A Sudden, Isn't It... This Was So Deliciously Perverse :D Thankyou For The Honor Of Reading This Work!

  • Nehema On Sunday, June 3, 2012, Nehema (1257)By person wrote:

    Thanks for the inspiration, maybe you can take me shooting one day - XXOO Scholar

  • Star On Sunday, June 3, 2012, Star (1185)By person wrote:

    mmm damn this is hot i love it....sexy ;)

  • Devilish On Saturday, June 2, 2012, Devilish (3758)By person wrote:

    Have I told you lately that I love you.. Have I told you theres no one else above you.. Girl.. Touch me tease me kiss me please me .. Scholar

  • Nehema On Sunday, June 3, 2012, Nehema (1257)By person wrote:

    Touching, tasting, kissing pleasing - love you too Doll Face Scholar

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