Haikus
By Delphoid-Q
Philosophy
I sit here and think
About God and creation
And achieve nothing.
Regret
A man came to me
But I pushed him far away
And now he is gone.
Futility
I watch the sun rise
Above a despondent world
And ask myself 'why?'.
Hope
An innocent child
As yet unaware of hate
Strides forth towards love.
Fulfilment
A river that flows
To meet the brine tainted sea
And there shed its pain.
Death
A blackened shadow
Stretching unseen from my feet
Stains my life with dread.
Loss
A mound of fresh earth
Covers what was once my life
But is now my death.
Harmony
A deep-seated love
That encircles all around
And binds with weak bonds.
Life
A flitter of thought
That pursues a futile course
And ends on a whim.
Boyhood
A freedom of will
Expressed through an unmarred love
For the world at large.
Love
A trust beyond thought
And a quickness to forgive
When that trust is dashed.
Peace
A balance of all
That centers around respect
And results in love.
Courage
A righteous knight's charge;
A guiltless man's sacrifice;
A diseased child's smile.
Despair
A torment of soul
Bred not by others' actions,
But by our own minds.
Innocence
A boy's furtive glance;
A beautiful maiden's blush;
A holding of hands.
Hate
A boiling of thought
That burns the substance of life
And consumes all joy.
Note: New haikus will be added as they are written (i.e. very rarely).
So, if you have nothing better to do, check back here once in a while (i.e.
very rarely) and you might be in luck (if you can call it that) :)
Comments on "Haikus"
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On Saturday, November 12, 2016, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Every one of these is a belter.
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On Thursday, February 25, 2016, Noel Haiasi
(35) wrote:
I've read many a haiku in my time, but these are top notch. I especially loved the one of innocence and courage. Very moving.
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On Saturday, November 3, 2012, Alchemist
(679) wrote:
I did the same thing to my haikus to save space before I became a Full member. So if your ever around these parts again and you get a chance check mine out but I will say yours are much better than mine, everyone of these are a masterpiece.
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A former member wrote:
i love the stanza about innocence, this was very creative, good job.
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On Sunday, September 17, 2006, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
wonderful! I love these all so much. But my favorite is innocence, it seems so pure. :)
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On Friday, July 14, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
Omg I loved every single one of these! Love, peace, and courage stood out for me. Just stunning and beautiful. Thank you. Julia~
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On Saturday, February 5, 2005, Grey Lies
(185) wrote:
nice write...a fav
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A former member wrote:
sublime zen that harkens back Naruda in my consciousness. we think alike, my friend; our thoughts are met in heart and pen. enjoyed them. do one about hate, perhaps?
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On Friday, December 3, 2004, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
Thank you. It's always good to know that people connect with your art... I think that's a very good idea. If anyone has any abstract nouns they wish me to do, suggest away ;)
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On Friday, October 22, 2004, Zahtsk
(26) wrote:
Like boyhead, death, life and courage
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A former member wrote:
wow.....this is beautiful:))
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On Tuesday, August 10, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
So, I'm checking back and I don't see any new ones... : ) Still enjoyed reading through these again, though. Ciao, T/S
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On Thursday, March 25, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
Courage, Futility and Regret are my faves... these are very clever. I enjoyed them vrey much and will be back to check for newbies. Fox
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A former member wrote:
each one is powerful and well done...i suggest writing many more, and publishing. would work
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
Every one of these is powerful and gorgeous... I love haikus, and you do them justice.
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On Thursday, December 11, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Courage is fantastic! I always look forward to your new creations. Ciao, T/S
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On Wednesday, September 10, 2003, Loneal
(86) wrote:
... the haiku seems so simple ... yet it states so much truth ... i really enjoyed "Philosophy", "Regret", and "Fulfilment" ... okay, I actually loved all of them! =) ... ~L
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On Tuesday, August 19, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Boyhood is great! I love revisiting these to see your new editions. Ciao, T/S
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On Friday, August 22, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
Thank you muchly T/S. Believe it or not, your enthusiasm is actually what keeps me writing these. Thanks for all the praise and encouragement. You have really helped me to further my art.
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On Sunday, July 27, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Great. Simply great!
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On Saturday, July 26, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Is this tears in my eyes?
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On Monday, June 23, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
I think Death is interesting, as far as capturing the notion of a shadow, giving evidence of something unseen, which you dread. Harmony is also fantastic!
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On Monday, June 23, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
I love your line " And binds with weak bonds " - excellent! Usually people speak of harmony in squishy terms like that is the default state of being. I love your sentiment! Ciao, T/S
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On Friday, June 20, 2003, diavolessa
(207) wrote:
I cannot write haikus but I can tell good ones and these are really good. ~D
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On Monday, June 16, 2003, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Mmmmm, now these I really liked, thanks. ~ mw
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On Monday, June 16, 2003, SeekingNirvana
(27) wrote:
ooo i really love this. words are spoken i've never thought of but know perfectly well what it is you say.. excellent
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On Saturday, June 7, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
I agree on Futility - wonderful piece! I also love Fulfillment - the notion of meeting the larger body of water and there shedding its pain is very interesting, particularly given the title. Very nice! I look forward to reading more of these! Ciao, T/
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On Saturday, June 7, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
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A former member wrote:
"Futility" this is one of the better Haiku's I've read. Well done.
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On Saturday, May 17, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Philosophy - I have often felt the same way when reading the self-serving meanderings of certain of philosophy's standards. The utility of a pursuit is often best judged by the voracity, not merely the time, with which it is pursued.
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On Saturday, May 17, 2003, FallenSky
(42) wrote:
we often achieve nothing when we contemplate what is unknown to us, or unknowable ...keep writing ~CFS
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On Friday, May 16, 2003, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
i like delphoid, smooth...........urban
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On Friday, May 16, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
hmm...i like i like lots.