Childish Woes

By Circe Avalon

Fallin' toys
And broken joys
And every little woe

In all the world
A plastic sword
only hits so hard

Broken wheels
and childish thrills
spin a wondrous thread

If the bugs
and lazy slugs
could only bring back the dead

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© 2007 Circe Avalon
Published on Wednesday, November 7, 2007.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • Alchemist On Friday, March 21, 2014, Alchemist (860)By person wrote:

    As an alchemist by trade and want to be necromancer by hobby I have to say slugs are a helpful friend to raise the dead, lol, cool write.

  • MindSpawn SlyFang On Friday, March 21, 2014, MindSpawn SlyFang (64)By person wrote:

    Quick, rhyming and slightly haunting. I love it! =D

  • Distorted_Reality On Monday, December 3, 2007, Distorted_Reality (102)By person wrote:

    woh this reminds me of something I wrote only much shorter, but with its simplicity it says so much and i can always love and respect that...good write ^_^

  • Alanarchy On Wednesday, November 7, 2007, Alanarchy (1126)By person wrote:

    This has a "so much depends on a red wheel barrow" feel to it. There's alot to dig out of so little. Love that. Reminds me, for some reason, of that Elect the Dead video. Cool stuff.

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Wednesday, November 7, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl (260)By person wrote:

    Wow, I really feel this. I've been having a lot of issues with regression and childhood and transition.. *breathes* I just need to expand my profile so I can submit them here. This is beautifully symbolic. Amazing.


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