..we promised {our} love on forgotten locks of hair..
By BeautifulCalamity
Poetry is making love, tasting cultures and
breathing in history with single words and the plainest of sentences..
Love is intricate but strong, Indefinite,
but timeless.. and true art lies in balance,
however disproportional
A friend of mine reads up on architecture..
I call him an artist..
I call him a creator, I call him a god..
And there is a small shard of glass cutting up the insides of my eye. I
think you have placed it there with the intention of opening my sight..
[brujeria]
Magic betwixt our bruises and our violence,
and together we light the glorious lanterns along the edges of the city..
so that they may lead us back home when we return from the sea..
.I hope it swallows us whole//and I wish that we would never live to see
another sunrise.
Goodbye my seven-legged whore,
your ravaged hands were not the beauty I thought I craved.
You.Are.Filth.
But I hope you'll visit me again another night..
"cause you're the one I love"
You set my heart on fire, everytime we make love on broken
coffins..
You tempt the dead with your feeble bones.
Death excites you, vixen.
Death embraces you soon..
I beg you to give me yourself,
just once more.
Once last moment to dance under weeping willows and stop time.
The only chance we have at being reborn
You want me-I can taste it in your kiss
......
Where have my dreams gone?
I feel their memory burning in these candles.
I'm trapped in this cloud-chasing reality,
and I cry out for you not to sacrifice your silver-strung
harp to love me..
.Please.
It is too beautiful, and I am so close to dying that I find it easier to
start living for once..
My ill-manored child, you are so elegant as you sleep,
and your breath is almost too subtle to notice.
So tell me what oppresses you, and make my eager mind believe I'll understand
when I'm older..
Since age has always made the difference to you.
Is it easier to spin now, on the glazed surfaces in your
breakable world?
Inhaling those chemical emotions must induce a safety in your mind. Forever
my fragile fairy,
you'll swallow those butterflies as they lay shaking...
so.close.to.death.
Won't you kill them to put them out of their pain?
The depth of the darkness puts me to sleep, with that blue strung heart
piercing into my face..
Dance tomorrow, today has faded.
And the spotlights have grown tired of your color..
The steps of your stage begin to twist and bend black,
in hope that they can keep you away from your new performance..
.We're now aware of the delicate masks you wear.
Now tell me, could you--
When does the next show start?
And... Now the stage is set for Romance
or
empty stares//hot violence//emptied-sex affairs
....
{cameras on}
The audience crowns the stage with the burning locks of intertwined hair,
because those promises never really were intended to be true..
Burn Me
and maybe for once I can wander without aim,
naked and free of all desire..
Until I find those white-laced dreams of never waking again,
and my search will end..
..And My Search Will End..
Comments on "..we promised {our} love on forgotten locks of hair.."
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A former member wrote:
This is very nicely done. It's intense and flows beautifully. Thank you.
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On Sunday, September 30, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
interesting... well written OTOH Was that ill-manored (badly housed) or ill-mannered (badly behaved)?
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A former member wrote:
Everything you write is so damn creative, lol, this is Migz from myspace....well from here really. So passionate and creative and pretty.
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A former member wrote:
where has this been??!?! egads. . .. stunning. encapsulating. breathtaking. bodyspinning. elaborate. and provocative. beauty.
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On Sunday, June 29, 2008, totaltrip
(36) wrote:
:)
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A former member wrote:
this is so twisted, it takes images and ideas and turns them inside out. I love it.
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On Tuesday, December 6, 2005, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
have you read much by ayn rand? i was just wondering, because you focus a lot on the 'creators' and man as a god like creature. ~lauren~
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On Thursday, December 9, 2004, FindAgentX
(31) wrote:
honestly made me cry. i can completely relate. "And there is a small shard of glass cutting up the insides of my eye. I think you have placed it there with the intention of opening my sight.." loved it, absolutely. love. fave.
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On Tuesday, November 30, 2004, torn_beauty
(77) wrote:
very intricate and embracing. to me anyway. stunning in your wording. I love it. truly.
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On Friday, November 26, 2004, WhoIAM
(27) wrote:
Beatiful opening lines, and over all great write.
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On Friday, November 26, 2004, darkleprechaun
(56) wrote:
interesting... me likes thank you for sharing it... YEAH!!
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On Friday, November 26, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Just wow... I can't even say anything. This was utterly perfect and a wonderful trip. Purely amazing.
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On Thursday, November 25, 2004, blue
(1409) wrote:
hangin' on every word 'til the end...delicate, yet most powerful!! wonderful imagery!! high praise! b
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On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
I honestly love this...but I can't find adequate words to tell you hjust how much...but I can at least shut my mouth before I let flies in... Kya
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On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Rone4611
(121) wrote:
^^friggin sexy!
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On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Rone4611
(121) wrote:
Love is intricate but strong, Indefinite, but timeless.. and true art lies in balance, however disproportional
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On Thursday, November 25, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
"to dance under weeping willows and stop time" - i love this especially, but this whole piece is gorgeously written, with several wonderful phrases and imageries portrayed. Beautiful work!
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A former member wrote:
intense, beautiful, unbelievable, amazing, deep, powerfull the list of words to describe this could go on and on. truly amazing. good job
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A former member wrote:
very beautiful
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On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
It felt like watching a train charging at you full speed, but being tied in place, and just waiting for the crushing finale. Wonderful.
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A former member wrote:
felt like i was watching a play , in black and white, about something i want to love but never captured
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On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Kitt
(17) wrote:
wow, that's an unbelievable peice. *favs* you're amazing.
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On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Kitt
(17) wrote:
ah, sorry can't fav due to lacking stap. i need the addess to send in my contrib but i will fav asap. :)
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On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Savannah
(218) wrote:
I agree, truly amazing