..we promised {our} love on forgotten locks of hair..

By BeautifulCalamity

Poetry is making love, tasting cultures and breathing in history with single words and the plainest of sentences..

Love is intricate but strong, Indefinite, but timeless.. and true art lies in balance,
however disproportional

A friend of mine reads up on architecture..
I call him an artist..
I call him a creator, I call him a god..

And there is a small shard of glass cutting up the insides of my eye. I think you have placed it there with the intention of opening my sight..

[brujeria]

Magic betwixt our bruises and our violence,
and together we light the glorious lanterns along the edges of the city.. so that they may lead us back home when we return from the sea..

.I hope it swallows us whole//and I wish that we would never live to see another sunrise.

Goodbye my seven-legged whore,
your ravaged hands were not the beauty I thought I craved.
You.Are.Filth.
But I hope you'll visit me again another night..

"cause you're the one I love"

You set my heart on fire, everytime we make love on broken coffins..
You tempt the dead with your feeble bones.
Death excites you, vixen.
Death embraces you soon..
I beg you to give me yourself,
just once more.
Once last moment to dance under weeping willows and stop time.
The only chance we have at being reborn

You want me-I can taste it in your kiss

......

Where have my dreams gone?
I feel their memory burning in these candles.
I'm trapped in this cloud-chasing reality,
and I cry out for you not to sacrifice your silver-strung
harp to love me..

.Please.

It is too beautiful, and I am so close to dying that I find it easier to start living for once..
My ill-manored child, you are so elegant as you sleep,
and your breath is almost too subtle to notice.

So tell me what oppresses you, and make my eager mind believe I'll understand when I'm older..
Since age has always made the difference to you.



Is it easier to spin now, on the glazed surfaces in your breakable world?
Inhaling those chemical emotions must induce a safety in your mind. Forever my fragile fairy,
you'll swallow those butterflies as they lay shaking...
so.close.to.death.
Won't you kill them to put them out of their pain?
The depth of the darkness puts me to sleep, with that blue strung heart piercing into my face..

Dance tomorrow, today has faded.
And the spotlights have grown tired of your color..
The steps of your stage begin to twist and bend black,
in hope that they can keep you away from your new performance..

.We're now aware of the delicate masks you wear.

Now tell me, could you--
When does the next show start?

And... Now the stage is set for Romance
or
empty stares//hot violence//emptied-sex affairs
....

{cameras on}

The audience crowns the stage with the burning locks of intertwined hair,
because those promises never really were intended to be true..

Burn Me

and maybe for once I can wander without aim,
naked and free of all desire..
Until I find those white-laced dreams of never waking again,
and my search will end..

..And My Search Will End..

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Copyright 2004 BeautifulCalamity
Published on Thursday, November 25, 2004.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This is very nicely done. It's intense and flows beautifully. Thank you.

  • BetaWolfinVA On Sunday, September 30, 2012, BetaWolfinVA (791)By person wrote:

    interesting... well written OTOH Was that ill-manored (badly housed) or ill-mannered (badly behaved)? Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Everything you write is so damn creative, lol, this is Migz from myspace....well from here really. So passionate and creative and pretty. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: where has this been??!?! egads. . .. stunning. encapsulating. breathtaking. bodyspinning. elaborate. and provocative. beauty. Scholar

  • totaltrip On Sunday, June 29, 2008, totaltrip (36)By person wrote:

    :)

  • A former member wrote: this is so twisted, it takes images and ideas and turns them inside out. I love it.

  • xserratedsoulx On Tuesday, December 6, 2005, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    have you read much by ayn rand? i was just wondering, because you focus a lot on the 'creators' and man as a god like creature. ~lauren~

  • FindAgentX On Thursday, December 9, 2004, FindAgentX (31)By person wrote:

    honestly made me cry. i can completely relate. "And there is a small shard of glass cutting up the insides of my eye. I think you have placed it there with the intention of opening my sight.." loved it, absolutely. love. fave.

  • torn_beauty On Tuesday, November 30, 2004, torn_beauty (77)By person wrote:

    very intricate and embracing. to me anyway. stunning in your wording. I love it. truly.

  • WhoIAM On Friday, November 26, 2004, WhoIAM (27)By person wrote:

    Beatiful opening lines, and over all great write.

  • darkleprechaun On Friday, November 26, 2004, darkleprechaun (56)By person wrote:

    interesting... me likes thank you for sharing it... YEAH!!

  • K_Love On Friday, November 26, 2004, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    Just wow... I can't even say anything. This was utterly perfect and a wonderful trip. Purely amazing.

  • blue On Thursday, November 25, 2004, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    hangin' on every word 'til the end...delicate, yet most powerful!! wonderful imagery!! high praise! b

  • Malice In Wonderland On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    I honestly love this...but I can't find adequate words to tell you hjust how much...but I can at least shut my mouth before I let flies in... Kya Scholar

  • Rone4611 On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Rone4611 (121)By person wrote:

    ^^friggin sexy!

  • Rone4611 On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Rone4611 (121)By person wrote:

    Love is intricate but strong, Indefinite, but timeless.. and true art lies in balance, however disproportional

  • purr_verse On Thursday, November 25, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    "to dance under weeping willows and stop time" - i love this especially, but this whole piece is gorgeously written, with several wonderful phrases and imageries portrayed. Beautiful work!

  • A former member wrote: intense, beautiful, unbelievable, amazing, deep, powerfull the list of words to describe this could go on and on. truly amazing. good job

  • A former member wrote: very beautiful

  • Six-Out On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    It felt like watching a train charging at you full speed, but being tied in place, and just waiting for the crushing finale. Wonderful.

  • A former member wrote: felt like i was watching a play , in black and white, about something i want to love but never captured

  • Kitt On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Kitt (17)By person wrote:

    wow, that's an unbelievable peice. *favs* you're amazing.

  • Kitt On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Kitt (17)By person wrote:

    ah, sorry can't fav due to lacking stap. i need the addess to send in my contrib but i will fav asap. :)

  • Savannah On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Savannah (218)By person wrote:

    I agree, truly amazing


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