Lady Rage

By Narcissa

In an ancient realm she exists
When dreams dare to take a twist
She summons anger with her touch
your sleeping soul will be hers to clutch
Tears of man flow thru her veins
ethereal bliss will never be gained
When caught in her webb of despair
The struggle futile you no longer care
Her vile breathe reeks of hate
as she speaks of your ill fate
"look into my eyes and see your dying ember
because it will be the last thing you remember"

So continue spilling lies and deceit
Before you approach satans seat
She will inflict the injustice you've spread
And eat you alive before you are dead
Even in hell the demons fear
When Lady Rage is called to appear

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Published on Tuesday, August 7, 2007. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Lady Rage"

On Saturday, August 18, 2018, Poeticexorcism (84) wrote:

Chilling to the end! My favorite line is " look into my eyes and see your dying ember because it will be the last thing you remember". Well done!
A former member wrote: this is an awesome piece...lady rage is something we cant associate with for long...she tears our morals and our love apart...beautiful poem
A former member wrote: well composed from the start... any way I can call upon Lady Narcissa? to appear?
A former member wrote: I really like your work Narcissa
On Monday, February 8, 2010, eske (11) wrote:

Something else with rhymes that means something more than candy inside my mind.
A former member wrote: hell yes this gets my noodle goin like mac an cheese. Can I kiss your feet?
A former member wrote: So continue spilling lies and deceit Before you approach satans seat, my favorite line it sent chills through me im in love with this piece! ~Sarah
On Tuesday, March 18, 2008, denver nitze (251) wrote:

this gave me chills. not because i'm frightened of 'lady rage', but because i think i might be her. very nice write. *cheers* ~tÅ~
On Tuesday, February 19, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (357) wrote:

I'm in love with the ending. Well written. *salutes*
On Sunday, January 27, 2008, SGT Bloth (162) wrote:

I hope to meet her someday...she is sooooo my type
A former member wrote: Just reading the first line pulls you into this piece. Great poem - great use of words. :)
On Tuesday, September 4, 2007, Circe Avalon (115) wrote:

really pretty!
On Saturday, September 1, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (93) wrote:

Intense and i loved it.
A former member wrote: Amazing, this is the kind of rhyming poem I adore. Beautifully put, it makes me think. I like the way your mind works :)
A former member wrote: The poem is beautiful and catchy, I liked it alot. The only thing I would fix is some of the spelling.
On Wednesday, August 8, 2007, Narcissa (391) wrote:

Thanks for the heads up = I'm not always watching what I type.
On Tuesday, August 7, 2007, Bella Butchery (696) wrote:

people are retarded for not commenting... dug the rhyme scheme