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ragged sirens
By Malice In Wonderland
the smell of ocean
bloomed
on her lips
past her tongue
gulls soaring through her aorta
she ran headlong
into the waves
mussels lining her nailbeds
growing along her jaw
and the currents streaming from her lashes
sailing into the void beyond
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Copyright 2013 Malice In Wonderland
Published on Saturday, July 27, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
random bullshit :pComments on "ragged sirens"
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On Monday, July 29, 2013, the Id
(31)
wrote:
Ive often imagined histories for the lady carved upon the ship's face and forced to crash bosom first into salted waves. This Siren took that form in my mind. This was really... haunting.
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On Saturday, July 27, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx
(334) wrote:
A Siren would be quite a sight. It takes the ugly for us to truly appreciate the beautiful i think. Lovely imagery, I can picture her. Also, reminds me of World Of Warcraft when a Siren runs off into the ocean when shes about to die lol Lovely write xoxo
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On Saturday, July 27, 2013, Maladroit
(202) wrote:
I want to be her when I grow up. No stone left unturned here.. The perfect amount of description gifting the reader cerebal decor.
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On Saturday, July 27, 2013, Star
(919) wrote:
It might be random but the image you create in this breathtaking. the last two lines are killer. I love it. defiently worth a ten. (:
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A former member wrote:
the image those last two lones evoke is quite powerful. i enjoyed this.
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On Saturday, July 27, 2013, dwells
(4284) wrote:
She sounds like a scallop to me, but maybe just a sea hag too, still pondering and loving the nautical nuances, cheers!
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