less viscous abstract
By NikesRain
why did the woman beat her head against
the wall?
because it felt so good when she stopped
she's not stopping
seven hits away
from a brain matter rendition
of something Pollock might
consider thoughtful
but this is not art
and she is
nothing
so close to grace
as dripping paint
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© 2009 NikesRain
Published on Wednesday, February 25, 2009.
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"Poetry"
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On Friday, November 17, 2017, Just Dave
(458) wrote:
Gives me room to pause and ponder for a bit. I really like this poem. JD
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On Monday, February 1, 2016, Drea
(1443) wrote:
I miss reading your work. I've found myself revisiting a lot of my favorites. This has always been one of them. I'll always come back to this.
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On Wednesday, April 15, 2009, Sin
(1168) wrote:
you are not close to grace..you are grace. no matter the hurdle or hurt i have never seen you less than beautiful inside and out. even your frustration seems lovely. envious always ~k
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A former member wrote:
wow...I'm speechless.this is great
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A former member wrote:
I read this like apiece of art hung in a hallway of a foreign eccentric,...it confused me but i just couldnt stop looking,...like i said, i observed it more than read it,...stilling piece.
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On Thursday, February 26, 2009, Drea
(1443) wrote:
This feels like a dream. Words so simple, but perfect. I wish I had the words to convey my feels of these words.
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On Thursday, February 26, 2009, elisa
(1616) wrote:
the Rorschach spatters of a muted poet, perhaps. perfect as always.
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A former member wrote:
Definitely a thought provoking piece. Short and splendorous. +tpu+
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A former member wrote:
reminds me of grafitti. hmm, me likey. *huggles*