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She Hurt Herself
By SilentStalker
She hurt herself again today;
Again I asked her why.
For when
I saw her torn like this,
A part of me would die.
But she'll just look back silently-
A look I've known too long;
In muffled voice and pouty lips,
She'd say that nothing's wrong.
And just like all the times before,
I'll never let it go;
Demanding answers to questions
I should already know.
And at her grave I realized,
So long I've failed to see;
She hurt herself to dull the pain-
The pain she'd get from me...
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Copyright 2005 Darun Ferguson
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A former member wrote:
oh my, you are good... ~A~
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On Sunday, October 2, 2005, CrestfallenTears
(17)
wrote:
Oh wow, this is soo good. I love it.
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A former member wrote:
thats wow, im speechless, i love the ending to the poem...
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A former member wrote:
Incredible, man. HEAVY!
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On Wednesday, May 4, 2005, tormentedsoul666
(74) wrote:
WOW...this is amazing i can see why you are DP royalty...ts666
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On Wednesday, May 4, 2005, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...heh, thanks, but apparently, writing skills have absolutely nothing do do with the Royalty status, else there'd be many more on the level...believe me, I don't compare to some writers here; DPmail me for a list of 'em...
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On Thursday, April 21, 2005, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
God damn, those last four lines.. Gut wrenching to say the least.. seriously awesome work, Darun. Jesus..
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On Saturday, March 19, 2005, so_skeevy
(64) wrote:
well, im reading it again and once again, i love it. Awesome job
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On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, so_skeevy
(64) wrote:
wow that was awesome. Definelty one of my favorites ive read. Keep writing i loved it.
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On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
oh geez...i know this feeling..well done!! *FAVES*
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On Friday, March 11, 2005, physicalgraffiti
(56) wrote:
holy shit. this is so incredible. the technique is flawless. thank you so much for the chills up my spine.
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On Friday, March 11, 2005, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
beautiful... stunning piece that twists my innards with barbed wire. Thank you.
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On Sunday, March 6, 2005, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
oh jesus, Darun...
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On Thursday, February 24, 2005, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
Wow...this...is definatly not what I'm used to from you, but wow, Darun, this is heartbreaking
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A former member wrote:
this makes me mope. thats crushing. what happened to horror flicks?! this is really awesome though. its from the other side of the street, not like normal writes. you amaze me.
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On Friday, February 18, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
so sad and so tragic, excellent job darun, flows so smoothly great job ~Emptyness~
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A former member wrote:
for fear of being redundant let us just pretend that my comment is a combination of all those comments below me....but at the same time refreashing and original with a smiley face at the end :)
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On Tuesday, February 15, 2005, Dei
(663) wrote:
THis hurts to read... because ive been on both sides. and im not sure which hurts worse...
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On Sunday, February 13, 2005, Alacer_Cogitatus
(140) wrote:
ive felt this before. it hurts tremendasly. A_C
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On Sunday, February 13, 2005, yslehc
(334) wrote:
how depressing....
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, nightshade
(118) wrote:
sex is usually right i wasn't expecting that last line this one brought tears to my eyes it makes me think of some of my own issues you should frame this one and give to all those people who abuse their spouses
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, nightshade
(118) wrote:
i don't usualy comment much but darun you're grat at evoking feelings and images with your words `night
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, A Broken Soul
(80) wrote:
amen to that. if only what you realized could be realized by people in my life... awesome write. i absolutely love it! ^Autumn^
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, GraySky
(15) wrote:
Beautiful.
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Every word hit me like bricks, this was incredible beautiful but heartwrencing all at the same time. Intense, indeed. Well written and well said.
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151) wrote:
Wonderful poem. sad but amazing. ~Unlucky
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
extremely well done. deceptively simple but in fact very insightful, reflective and sad. Great metre too.
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
nice -kitty
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, DoctorAsh
(371) wrote:
very nice home chicken
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
I was going to come and leave my normal shit talking comment. But yea. I just have to go to another page now...
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, Elise
(187) wrote:
Wow Darun. This is so sad. Intense wording. A great read from begining to end.
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, sIo
(898) wrote:
this was amazing. favs as well.
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A former member wrote:
wow, amazing...this is goin in my favorites. ~siren~
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A former member wrote:
ok well it would if i could figure out a way to do it...*feels like a moron* :/
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