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Remember the rain...
By Malice In Wonderland
Inky darkness
The intricate web of pain
Wreaking havoc
On
unsuspecting souls
The stars will fall
As the blackest tears
tonight
Like rain
-Pounding-
Blinding light
So dark
When angels fall
And the Goddess cries
Blood runs
through you
-Pulsing-
Mourning doves
Gather
round
Watching over those lost
Shedding tears
Feathers fall
-Drifting-
Away....
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Copyright 2004 Kylee McCain
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On Saturday, March 2, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795)
wrote:
Beautiful Poem... glad that i went back this far :)
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On Saturday, November 24, 2012, PoetessDarkly
(700) wrote:
lovely and dark my most favorite type of poetry.
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On Monday, October 1, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
How do you re-post an older work without losing the comments? This was enchanting, cheers!
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On Tuesday, September 4, 2012, Scarrzz
(238) wrote:
I understand what it feels like to fall.
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A former member wrote:
I can picture it all... thank you for this amazing visual.
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A former member wrote:
hear the falling rain with these words i feel your pain very good one of my favs
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A former member wrote:
That was amazing. It really feels very professional. You have a great style!
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On Tuesday, May 22, 2007, Moonflower
(301) wrote:
beautiful
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A former member wrote:
i wish i had your talent..could you tell me what you think of my poems?...pls
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A former member wrote:
super
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A former member wrote:
This is gorgeous and unique. I'm a Seattle girl, so I worship the rain and definitely can identify with some of this...
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On Monday, March 20, 2006, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
mmmmm...delicious.. i'm a sucker for anything about stars and rain, and you got them both. good write. ~lauren~
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A former member wrote:
cool poem i liked it
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On Sunday, June 26, 2005, Aethelwyne
(51) wrote:
i love the rain
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A former member wrote:
:D mmm you have a beautifal mind and you express it well, very cool poem~maistro~
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A former member wrote:
HOW CUTE>>>>
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On Tuesday, May 10, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
So beautiful!
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On Monday, April 25, 2005, Redbudyz
(4) wrote:
kya never knew you were so good love it
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On Monday, April 18, 2005, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
beauty, pure beauty
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On Sunday, March 13, 2005, blue
(1454) wrote:
Wow, your obscurity paints an intoxicating picture....so very well done raindear! ~b
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On Thursday, January 6, 2005, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
excellent.
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A former member wrote:
consumes me...
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A former member wrote:
this is so gorgeous. all the right pauses in all the right places. perfect flow from words to picture. wonderfully done!
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On Wednesday, July 21, 2004, glasshouse
(548) wrote:
Beautiful painting here. Excellent. It feels like it could go on forever. You are wonderful with descriptive adjective. Good write. -Glass
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On Saturday, July 17, 2004, Tracer
(100) wrote:
so wonderfully overlapping, the entire read was like being smothered by a blackness you could not escape, excellent write,
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On Monday, June 14, 2004, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
That was...depressing, but beautiful :) nicely done *~seraph~*
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On Friday, May 28, 2004, Graveyard_Desciple
(39) wrote:
very good. Love it. great flow and imagery. great write
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On Thursday, May 27, 2004, Railway_Butterfly
(354) wrote:
Very powerful piece...Nice strong imagery that I could have lost myself in,though..I felt it ended too soon...Butterfly..xxx...
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A former member wrote:
stunning visuals to accompany the inherant emotion
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On Wednesday, May 26, 2004, Midnight Shadow
(67) wrote:
Ahh...I perceive this to be about losing people you love and the heartbreak that comes with it. Beautiful! ~Midnight
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