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Kill You
By SilentStalker
And with this hatchet I thee wed
I bury it inside your head
I throw you to the cellar floor
Turn out the light, and bolt the door
How could you choose another man?
Why is his ring now on your hand?
How dare you coldly say goodbye?
So for my pain you had to die
I loved you then with all my life
I wanted you to be my wife
But that damned choice you dared to make
Was all it took for me to break
I'm sorry that you had to see
My anger pouring out of me
But if you didn't have that whim
That axe may just have been for him
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Copyright 2003 Darun Ferguson
Comments on "Kill You"
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On Friday, August 24, 2012, dwells
(4285)
wrote:
Always takes two to tango - wise choice!
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On Sunday, July 8, 2012, Star
(920) wrote:
wow the girl cheating on the man, with another man, then killing her in the end...awesome dude...i loved it (:
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On Sunday, July 8, 2012, Invisible Girl
(134) wrote:
brilliant!
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A former member wrote:
AWESOME, i really liked this piece, very chaotic feel, bravo.
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On Tuesday, June 1, 2010, HeadpatSlut
(259) wrote:
Another great one Stalker, you rock it with a Hatchet! Thanks for the bloody write man. >:)
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A former member wrote:
great write, i have afew people id like to do that to.
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On Monday, May 21, 2007, glasshouse
(548) wrote:
oh you evil evil man. I adore you in every possible way. Thank gods for the random button. --Jes
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On Monday, October 2, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
the perfect answer to the question ...'...what do i have to do to get it through your thick skull...'........primal indulgence....just the release i was craving.
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On Tuesday, April 28, 2009, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...just so you know, I come back to this write every so often, read this comment, and let out a laugh that would worry people...one of my favorite responses I've ever received on some of my stuff...
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On Wednesday, April 29, 2009, elisa
(1616) wrote:
i often revisit your writes... then surf a little porn to finish me off
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On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
very tragic and twisted. great job ~Emptyness~
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On Wednesday, July 7, 2004, nesbia
(15) wrote:
i liked the flow of the poem.
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A former member wrote:
Your poetry makes me all flustered...*spinechills* This is an excellent example of your perfect rhyme.
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On Thursday, March 11, 2004, Jonas
(720) wrote:
ummmm...
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On Saturday, March 13, 2004, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...worried...?
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On Sunday, September 28, 2003, HeLlSeND
(40) wrote:
I had an axe that was too dull, so instead i broke your skull, it was messy yes indeed, but finally i saw you bleed.......(don't ask me why i keep rhyming these things, your poetry inspires...or something)
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On Sunday, September 28, 2003, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
..hahaha...love it...can I post that one...or will you...? -Darun
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On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, HeLlSeND
(40) wrote:
Expand it......use it.....do with it as you wish....i'm gonna write something else in your honor anyway
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On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...I never had something written because of me...I'm honored...
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A former member wrote:
LOL This is funny. Okay...in that morbid funny way. He he...
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