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Dawn & Dusk
By Alchemist
The moon fading fast
A pale face aging alone
Now stars are all gone
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Sun rays beam golden
Seals broken to Mother's song
Now shadows grow long
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Copyright 2013 Alchemist
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A former member wrote:
I like this. Night and day, and the contrast between them both. Haikus are so simple, but pack a punch. Reminds me of seeing colored stars as a child. ^^
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On Friday, February 21, 2014, Melankolia
(46)
wrote:
Wonderful!
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On Tuesday, August 13, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium
(273) wrote:
This is lovely, I love the image it creates.. Great write :)
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On Monday, May 20, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...changing of the guard, neither day nor night. they must have a special purpose...
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On Sunday, May 19, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Mothers never get the credit they deserve for keeping us from becoming savages - cheers Shawn!
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