Dawn & Dusk

By Alchemist

The moon fading fast
A pale face aging alone
Now stars are all gone


*


Sun rays beam golden
Seals broken to Mother's song
Now shadows grow long

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Copyright 2013 Alchemist
Published on Sunday, May 19, 2013.     Filed under: "Haiku" and "Poetry"

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  • A former member wrote: I like this. Night and day, and the contrast between them both. Haikus are so simple, but pack a punch. Reminds me of seeing colored stars as a child. ^^

  • Melankolia On Friday, February 21, 2014, Melankolia (68)By person wrote:

    Wonderful!

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Tuesday, August 13, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium (396)By person wrote:

    This is lovely, I love the image it creates.. Great write :)

  • River Lily On Saturday, June 8, 2013, River Lily (1083)By person wrote:

    Such a beautiful haiku, soft and gentle imagery. Adored this. :) Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Monday, May 20, 2013, FadedBlues (2948)By person wrote:

    ...changing of the guard, neither day nor night. they must have a special purpose...

  • dwells On Sunday, May 19, 2013, dwells (5656)By person wrote:

    Mothers never get the credit they deserve for keeping us from becoming savages - cheers Shawn!

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