The Constellation Uandi

By Alchemist



                        Your eyes were like lost constellations when we first met

                      I was a celestial cowboy with star lasso and spurs to match

                     So I herded those flirtatious supernovas to a new destination

                          A quadrant of the sky I affectionately named You and I


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Copyright 2012 Alchemist
Published on Monday, June 25, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: What a beautiful post. I´d bet she loved this...good luck!

  • dwells On Monday, June 25, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    I think that is an African name maybe someplace in Uganda? (HA) Cheers Shawn and a celestial treat for sure, thanks.

  • Nehema On Monday, June 25, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    Lovely... - XXOO Scholar

  • RubyXero On Monday, June 25, 2012, RubyXero (481)By person wrote:

    what a beautiful piece. such passion in few words.

  • A former member wrote: Agreed. Simplistic and lovely.

  • A former member wrote: or rather, lovely with such few words. Simplistic just doesn't quite fit.

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