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Sorrow Rising
By Alchemist
When we cry,
We cry together and drowned the world
But will that flood bring back our love
Or trap the message on
a ship in a bottle
Because hope floats best on low tides
As your
monument washes up on shore
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Copyright 2012 Alchemist
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On Saturday, June 16, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(612)
wrote:
Excellent write, A. For such a small piece it really packs a wallop. Very well done. Cool. Later -
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A former member wrote:
I am amazed more with each one of your posts I read. This short post is much deeper than most 5-page works. Incredible point with so few words
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On Tuesday, June 12, 2012, dwells
(4285) wrote:
What she gave up to trust you perhaps? You scalawag! Cheers, Bro!
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On Monday, June 11, 2012, Nehema
(960) wrote:
The feeling of lost love, I know all to well at the moment. It's during these low times that you get to explore the strength of a relationship, and decide if it should set out to sea - XXOO
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On Monday, June 11, 2012, Dei
(665) wrote:
simple and lovely. I love short poems the best
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On Sunday, June 10, 2012, Dominic
(54) wrote:
Succinct and classy. I like it.
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