Sorrow Rising

By Alchemist

When we cry,
We cry together and drowned the world
But will that flood bring back our love
Or trap the message on a ship in a bottle
Because hope floats best on low tides
As your monument washes up on shore

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Published on Sunday, June 10, 2012. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Sorrow Rising"

On Saturday, June 16, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606) wrote:

Excellent write, A. For such a small piece it really packs a wallop. Very well done. Cool. Later -
A former member wrote: I am amazed more with each one of your posts I read. This short post is much deeper than most 5-page works. Incredible point with so few words
On Tuesday, June 12, 2012, dwells (4177) wrote:

What she gave up to trust you perhaps? You scalawag! Cheers, Bro!
On Monday, June 11, 2012, Nehema (958) wrote:

The feeling of lost love, I know all to well at the moment. It's during these low times that you get to explore the strength of a relationship, and decide if it should set out to sea - XXOO
On Monday, June 11, 2012, Dei (663) wrote:

simple and lovely. I love short poems the best
On Sunday, June 10, 2012, Dominic (53) wrote:

Succinct and classy. I like it.