Sands of Time

By Alchemist

                      






                           We live in the present it's all we have that's real. 

        The future is just as unreal as the past but the one thing you can count on
            is the future being the present and that same present being the past. 

 So in this present moment let the sands of time caress your toes and warm your feet. 

    Let the winds of change whip through the night and cool your face while you wait
                                              in anticipation for the day.





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Copyright 2011 Undead Alchemist
Published on Friday, November 4, 2011.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

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  • A former member wrote: obviously im new.,, Should read..not meant to last

  • A former member wrote: Of course i picked this one...and i do anticipate "the day" but my demon is steadfast, and we shall not indulge any caress..beautiful read in what was my past, but my future is told. i am meant to last

  • dwells On Friday, November 4, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Hi shawn - you could have made 8 short lines out of the last two lines, like many do to give the illusion of "length". But, fine as is and strictly a matter of taste. These last two lines were some of the best you've written, thanks.

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