~*~ Falcons Gliding Among Ruins ~*~
By NikesRain
she's skimming across
the floor like thistledown
parchment feet engraved with silk tied
sonnets
that seem to keep her just off the ground
turning pirouettes
that bleed with passions lost
grasping at forgotten heartbeats as
if they were wishes
there's only music in her veins when she's breathless
~*~
the sky seemed to inject into her vision long ago
not with the glow of a sunrise but the silver of the moon
she still
focuses with amorphic shades of dreaming
mixing a pallet of reverie
like smoke and indigo
looking for the softest curves in the roughest
barks
that vibrant streak of azure singing on wolvesbane petals
~*~
she sways among blushing magnolia boughs that reach
for her
they know where every snowflakes kiss has marked her skin
slipping past the hollow fallen oak where her tears hang like fireflies
she brushes close enough to shiver then slips away on a breeze
impervious
to the nightshade pleading for her sighs
trailing splinters of shattered
stars like ribbons of dulcet desire
~*~
someone forgot
to tell her she should close her eyes
hyperopic dreams shouldn't dance
within a myopic heart
yet there are times when the phantasms of longing
blind her
steps tracing devotions like bows making love to violins
the music that eminates from her soul resounds through the sky
then
one errant root catches her sorrow and she falls like autumn
~*~
she's floating under moonbeams with midnight dusted wanting
waiting for the dawn to come and force her back to the ground
Awards
Comments on "~*~ Falcons Gliding Among Ruins ~*~"
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On Tuesday, May 10, 2016, Lux
(280) wrote:
I saw visions while reading this. A ballet dancers feet, cracked and bleeding for the dream to Be. Falcons swooping alongside a cliff, dangerous and deep and deadly, but so thrilling. And more than anything I saw the witch I once was, whispering sweet passions sadly to the poisons and antidotes, slipping through a quiet woodland. This is etched into my mind. Thank you.
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On Tuesday, May 10, 2016, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
A deep entrancing piece that rewards and reveals that bit more on each subsequent read. Mesmerising.
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On Thursday, November 8, 2012, lenores_death
(15) wrote:
brilliant. beautiful. breathtaking. too many things to say, and not enough words to say it.
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A former member wrote:
You had me at falcons. Excellent!
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On Monday, August 2, 2010, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
your poetry = beautiful. it really does. the concluding couplet is especially divine; oh, and "amorphic shades of dreaming" - love that.
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A former member wrote:
intoxicating.... feels like being completely absorbed into a dream... anti-gravity fantasy.. graceful as a goddess is..
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A former member wrote:
Whimsical and free. Lovely write. =)
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Riven Waker
(317) wrote:
quite a mesmerizing piece - lulled me into a state of deep tranquility - beautiful & brilliant
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A former member wrote:
Brilliant write again. As always! :)
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On Saturday, June 26, 2010, Dilated View
(582) wrote:
This felt musical, flowing, enchanting, like something that couldn't possibly exist but which has not yet realized that. Soothing, very much enjoyed the visuals you created and the way you displayed them. Nicely written.
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On Thursday, June 24, 2010, ALBATROSS
(194) wrote:
Just gorgeous. You paint quite an image, I can tell you put a lot of effort and deliberation into it. There is a motion to the images as well, something dynamic. I quite liked "hyperopic dreams shouldn't dance within a myopic heart" Well done.