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Buried
By SilentStalker
It hurt...
...so much
...to believe...
....that you had died.
It hurt even more...
...to learn that you made....
...the choice
the CHOICE
...to not tell us otherwise...
Until someone told you it was the best thing for you...
...for
you...
...what
about me...?
...where was I...?
...Oh yes, thinking you were gone...
GONE
...Too much has happened...
...too little was said...
...the curtain has fallen...
...the casket's been d
r
a
p
e
d...
...I'm sorry...
...I can't bring myself to love again...
...that which I've buried so long ago...
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Copyright 2010 SilentStalker
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A former member wrote:
I thought that was an very detailed poem telling how it feels to lose someone you care for and loved very dearly
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On Monday, August 12, 2013, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703)
wrote:
I like the flow and feel of this one a lot, as well as the barely provided details that make this at once attainable and mysterious. Ciao, T/S
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On Saturday, February 16, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
Love the way that you did this :) good words, good flow...
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A former member wrote:
This is beautiful, darun.
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On Friday, April 6, 2012, daiglepoems
(95) wrote:
That is one bad motherfucker.
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A former member wrote:
What an amazing poem - loved it.
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A former member wrote:
Amazing...
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
i really just do not know what to say accept.......write on.....~S
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On Wednesday, May 5, 2010, Miztaken4beauty
(177) wrote:
I love the format. it shows scattered thoughts and sleepless nights.
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On Sunday, January 10, 2010, Iwas
(39) wrote:
The way you laid out the poem carried the words all the farther not that they wouldnt have gone far on their own. Very well done friend.
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On Saturday, January 24, 2009, Aleas
(171) wrote:
Man, it's tough. To get through something like that intact, and remain a functional and contributional human being. It should never be a choice. It should never be so bad that there is actually belief that there IS a choice. I'm sorry.
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On Saturday, January 24, 2009, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
:(
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On Saturday, January 24, 2009, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
I don't know what to say, I just know
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