Watching
By SilentStalker
Do you know that I'm watching you?
Can you feel my eyes?
Gazing
at your silken hair;
The softness of your thighs?
Adoring
both your feet and hips;
Your breasts I want to taste?
Or
peering 'round your shoulders just
To see your pretty face?
Or staring in amazement at
Places I've never been?
Envisioning mere fantasies
Of things I've never seen?
While watching every move you make
And growing twice in size...
Do you know that I'm watching you?
Can you feel my eyes?
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Copyright 2004 Darun Ferguson
Comments on "Watching"
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On Friday, August 30, 2013, Commander_Cadaver
(233) wrote:
Now I see why you go by SilentStalker. I liked it. Like a small window into the mind of a stalker.
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On Thursday, November 15, 2012, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
Oh to know what lays in wait behind this... fuel for my thoughts.....
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On Saturday, January 28, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Hell yeah!!! Why is it everytime i read you i get hypmotized....
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On Sunday, December 23, 2007, Mari
(419) wrote:
Doesn't every guy fantasize about a hot girl once and a while/
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A former member wrote:
Short, hard, intense and to the point. Good writing should be like good sex and this certainly was. The subject matter was erotic (to me, anyway) and it was delivered wham, bam, thank you ma'am. Loved it, loved it, loved it.
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A former member wrote:
i like this poem.it shows that you care about the people u love.
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On Wednesday, July 27, 2005, ApathysKiss
(377) wrote:
creepy =) now your username makes sense and just for that into favourites you go =).
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On Wednesday, July 27, 2005, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...if you thought this one explained my username, you didn't look far enough down the list for the real reasons...but yeah; I can see where you'd get that idea...
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A former member wrote:
I really liked this poem!
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On Friday, April 16, 2004, yslehc
(334) wrote:
scary, love it though :P
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A former member wrote:
oooh...creepy, i like this one alot ~serpentine~
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A former member wrote:
I love to watch. That's what makes this poem so interesting. It's the tip of the iceberg of my people watching fascination.
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On Sunday, February 22, 2004, Moodswing
(63) wrote:
i never thought id see the day you posted something with even a slight erotic appeal to it...but i must applaud this peice...not often one can make feeling dirty sound so much fun...lol
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On Sunday, February 8, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Very stalkerish and serial killerish i dont know if thats what you intended but thats what i got. Stalker hunting prey...
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On Sunday, February 8, 2004, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...that's about the gist of it...maybe not the serial killer part, though...