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The Vampire
By SilentStalker
I find them in the darkness and they're never seen again.
A hunger
for the blood of life runs through me now and then.
I'm damned
to live eternally, no pleasure, taste, nor smell.
The truth of my
existence lies within the Gates of Hell.
He runs, but then
I catch him, and he dies against his will.
No matter how much blood
I drink, my hunger is not filled.
No form of luck will save
a man, as fate shall lead him through.
And do believe, for I perceive,
the next may just be you.
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
Copyright 2003 Darun Ferguson
Comments on "The Vampire"
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A former member wrote:
Hell yes!!.. I love vampires and this piece is just perfect!!.. Cool imagery!! :)
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A former member wrote:
Great work! I became hunger for the blood too :)
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On Monday, February 11, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795)
wrote:
ohhhh very well ... executed... shall we say?
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A former member wrote:
Dark; i enjoyed reading this.
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A former member wrote:
Dark and beautiful.
Bravo.
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A former member wrote:
I love vampires ,they arent written about enough ,so i really enjoyed this ! :)thanks
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On Thursday, November 8, 2007, Distorted_Reality
(101) wrote:
perfect flow, well writtien all and all magnificent poem ;)
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On Saturday, May 27, 2006, Vexed
(74) wrote:
threatening and exciting...I love vampires...even the thought of dieing at the hands of one is thrilling...I liked this...
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On Sunday, March 6, 2005, Shadow Fox
(20) wrote:
great write, and I loved the end. I'm just sorry I haven't had a chance to read much of anything lately
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On Saturday, December 6, 2003, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
Ah. Another wonderful piece of blood-sucking poetry. Delicious...
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On Thursday, September 25, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
My kiss will be gentle..
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On Monday, September 29, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
But realy stinky.*running away hiding* ¦Ñªê
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On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, angelunderneath
(60) wrote:
Rhythm was great and I loved the end
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On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
flow was great, overall enjoyed this piece immensely.
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On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
this was truely an enjoyable piece of work, makes me think a vampire hungers for blood the way we humans hunger for love, all consumming, very nice....O
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On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets
(55) wrote:
very nice piece, it had a wonderful flow and wording was so easily pictured thanks for sharing
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On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, kissofdeath
(9) wrote:
wow, that was fucking great!!!!
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On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
*Brain Bleed* Yes, damn vampires. Am I the only one seing beyond the blood? Dont think so... Becouse this contains alot! And I damn it all to hell, I damn myself there too. Tiger
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On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Or some other wicked place....
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A former member wrote:
This is a different kind of vampire poem than I usually see on here. It's well...I can't find the words at the moment. I like it! I like the twist at the end!
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