Lust for the Dead
By SilentStalker
And yet you fight to sway my blade; to
keep your life you strive.
But you will do no good for me
while you are still alive.
So in a flash your throat is
slit; your blood is dripping down.
I watch your gags, the
blood you spit while thrashing all around.
You grasp
your throat, but still you choke, and blood is all you see.
You're acting like a slaughtered pig thrown down in front of
me.
And finally your choking stops; mere silence takes its
place.
You're slumped into a little pile, fear strewn along
your face.
I've brought you past the bridge of life;
you are now in my world.
I want to show you all my love, my
precious little girl.
Now calm your soul; you look so scared,
yet now you don't oppose.
I kiss your lips, i stroke your hair,
I take off all your clothes.
So beautiful you are to
me; I clean up all the blood.
I'm so aroused; I cannot wait;
I drag you from the mud.
I spread your legs; I come inside;
your flesh is getting cold.
Your skin so soft; your lips
so tight; my lust I cannot hold.
I thrust with greed;
I thrust with rage; you still look out in fear.
I close your
eyes, I kiss your cheek, I whisper in your ear.
I set you
now on top of me; my hands caress your breasts.
I'm writhing
here in ecstasy, your head upon my chest.
And finally
my climax comes; I have fulfilled my need.
I hold you tight
against my waist and give you all my seed.
But you should
have no need for it as you will soon decay,
So now I bury
you with love, and calmly walk away.
Comments on "Lust for the Dead"
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A former member wrote:
Wow, this is amazing...I bow down to you.
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A former member wrote:
It's good, I can't gather anymore words than that, awesome rhythm, It flows well. *~*~Stephanie~*~* AKA merciless_death
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On Saturday, November 29, 2003, Moodswing
(63) wrote:
is it strange that i should be aroused by such darkness....i love your work...
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On Wednesday, October 29, 2003, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
great write, a lil on the unsanitary side, but an excellent poem, keep writing, i enjoy resding all your works and cant wait for the next one! -Emptyness-
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On Monday, October 20, 2003, Drifter
(268) wrote:
Well, thats kinda gross. Fun to read though
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On Monday, October 20, 2003, yslehc
(334) wrote:
creepy lol, i like it
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On Tuesday, October 14, 2003, hate_doll
(265) wrote:
hee hee...very disturbing, but as drea said, alluring...the rhyme and rhythm brought it all together and made it a darkly tantalizing necro treat :)
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On Monday, October 13, 2003, Silver Spectre
(90) wrote:
You are a necro!!!!..lol...this actualy scared me a bit..and I am a grown man.*shivers off to smoke a cig~Silver~
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A former member wrote:
Wow, this definatly scarred me for life but it's so well written, i just love it. Same with all the other stuff, but this is just amazing. Keep up the good work!
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A former member wrote:
THis is the best thing ive read so far today. I love the rhyme scheme. And don't worry about being a little meesed up, we all are
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On Thursday, October 2, 2003, Drea
(1443) wrote:
disturbing...yet alluring..hehehe i like.. i like a lot..~Drea~ /X\(..)/X\
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A former member wrote:
Now That was interesting! And don't worry about the rhyming...it was perfect. Anyone up for some necrophilia?
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On Sunday, September 14, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
Well i'd rather not get on my soap box about normalcy, its just an urban legend to me anyway. This piece flowed very nicely and as far as the necro theme heh its all in what gets the job done! -kRyz
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On Sunday, September 14, 2003, Liz
(267) wrote:
Don't worry about not being normal. This is FAR from the most disturbing thing I've seen here. You have an awsome command of rhythm and ryhme and I do like the style. Not my bag, personally, but that's ok.