Comments by Silver Spectre

  • "But then when I figured out that I asked for it and make contracts. I found the only thing hiding what was going to change a tragedy and turn it into a hero's journey. I just wasn't asking the right question."
    Posted by Silver Spectre on "Evicted Faith." by Lux
  • "My youth was very much what you describe here and everything happens so fast and just kept going and I never told anybody. Even the perpetrators didn't know my story because you don't exist when they don't see you. They didn't even realize I went to 28 schools growing up"
    Posted by Silver Spectre on "Evicted Faith." by Lux
  • "This is an amazing statement given in the style of a question I suppose. I wonder if it started as a question in you that you realized you already had the answer and all you did was pull it out. After all is said and done, when we write of longing for someone to hold hands with do we also ask for the fortitude and faith that we would need to "make it" in such a longing under the circumstances you have stated. Or as I seem to tell each new Girlfriend only to receive a look of great dismay, "Obviously if you and I were any good at this you and I wouldn't be climbing into bed now. Well said, Silver Spectre"
    Posted by Silver Spectre on "The Art of Transcending" by BleedSilver
  • "I am glad to see that your writing received a long overdue recognition from the sites other poets. I would like to see more from my friend. Closer than most friends I have ever had. In Darkness we find a Planeterization of a mystery we have brought ourselves to. Which way to shine a light in its gravity and history is a journey just for one. This was well spoken and with truthful words that bloom. I wonder what you found there. "
    Posted by Silver Spectre on "ALONE" by Qwendragoness
  • "And she dropped some pretty heavy riddles. Phrases like. "I knew you would survive but your brother wouldn't be able to." she said it twice with no context and always left me speechless.It never fit where I would have placed it once she added my brother 7 years younger. or once, a homeless teen I was walking down the street and they pulled over and she walked up to me and said always respect women. and then she walked back to the car and they drove off. I'm standing there speechless. riddles she couldn't answer later in life as she would hide behind made up stories she needed to believe and she was so thin I could see her getting thinner as she gave what she had left to that same brother who inst making it."
    Posted by Silver Spectre on "Her River Bends" by Silver Spectre
  • "I t dawns on me after My mothers passing and this past mothers day dealing with also my Grandmother passing just a few months later as I found out. This poem is about my Mother. I never really knew who it was about and I just kept seeing her collapse and the shock of long hair from collision. I have spent the last year doing what most cant do and its going down the rabbit hole of ones self, the only way to get free to who you are. I hope to write something better for her when I am done.- silver"
    Posted by Silver Spectre on "Her River Bends" by Silver Spectre
  • "Thanks, i actually did not realize I republished this as I wrote it in 2003 or so and posted it here. I was on thinking it is time to write again and saw one of my last was no longer visible. I used to outgrow my poems as I got older but this one still gets me."
    Posted by Silver Spectre on "© Past Life Tragedy" by Silver Spectre
  • "Maybe, it is an art lost with us!!! Ever feel like it isn't as it was, and will never be again? Maybe I have drank too much, but, how I love the Milk! "
    Posted by Silver Spectre on "Our Love" by GreekPhilosopher
  • "I amglad you did not take this down as you said you would.It is a very good write and you brought to these words such emotion.~Silver~"
    Posted by Silver Spectre on "Envy" by Qwendragoness
  • "when all is said and done it is love that we want so why not write about it. And i think all us men know how dumb we get when in the company of a woman that just blows us away...I am with you on this write...well done..Silver"
    Posted by Silver Spectre on "Missing You" by SilentStalker
  • "There are some great lines here... Looks like there are some typos you may want ti fix but I like the flow and the tale.~Silver"
    Posted by Silver Spectre on "Forever" by streetpoet
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