Storyteller

By Nehema

 

Visions of dualities


Personification through 


Colorful personalities


Though mine be untrue





Birthed in my imagination

Set free through a keyboard

Satisfying the needy starvation

Sometimes striking a chord



Middle aged and decaying

My mind needs renovating

Ideas and ideals fraying

Past life deteriorating


Comforting and wise

It's the lies I despise

No need for disguise

Truth = the greatest prize









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Copyright 2012 Robyn Layne
Published on Tuesday, December 18, 2012.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

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  • A former member wrote: Like the word play. Keep it up!

  • darkheartmagic On Sunday, November 17, 2013, darkheartmagic (81)By person wrote:

    very powerful write loved it. I haven't had the chance to get on much but I look forward to reading some more of you work. outstanding write.

  • Ortolan On Wednesday, December 19, 2012, Ortolan (214)By person wrote:

    Well done, plainly structured and to the point.A bonus that there is a point, truth=10.

  • haunted On Monday, December 17, 2012, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    very cool robyn, im wondering if i should post my poe101 poem. i wasnt sure if i wanted to kind of do that because it was written specificaly for the class. but your entry is perfect for an intro. awesome!

  • Strataic On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Strataic (99)By person wrote:

    Because honesty can transform something and last longer as is the beauty of this piece thanks Scholar

  • Nehema On Monday, December 17, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    Thanks Cipher, indeed. Honesty builds the strongest foundation and I've found it to be the simplest way to combat fear. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: i love this, such an honor to truth Scholar

  • Nehema On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    You know me better than most on this subject superman :) thanks for your continued support - XXOO Scholar

  • Invisible Girl On Saturday, December 15, 2012, Invisible Girl (134)By person wrote:

    You are a wonderful storyteller... however close to the truth it may be...your words bite and make a mark. No silly veils to hide behind- just tell it like it is. I love your words. Well done my friend.

  • Nehema On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    I miss you!! Thanks, that means a lot coming from you Scholar

  • dwells On Saturday, December 15, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    A truth seeker, there are only a few of us left! Well done Baby Girl and since this was for the class, I noticed how your rhyme scheme changed in the second half. Not a bit of a distraction and well done!

  • Nehema On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    Why you gotta rat me out daddy? lol Scholar

  • PoetessDarkly On Saturday, December 15, 2012, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    wow this is awesome! I love the flow and imagery. awesome awesome love it.

  • Nehema On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    Thanks PD ;) Scholar

  • Star On Saturday, December 15, 2012, Star (879)By person wrote:

    wow.. top spot on this one... this is fanastic... awesome (:

  • Nehema On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    Thanks for your continued support Bran, loves - XXOO Scholar

  • Devilish On Saturday, December 15, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Oh my god yay for the sweetie. i am proud of you . high five .. down low.. turn around .. now knees to the ground.. lol. yay. Scholar

  • Nehema On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    lmao, really? Love you mama Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Saturday, December 15, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...proudly stated, Robyn. poetry is a passionate need, & at times a painful struggle...

  • Nehema On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    Indeed baby, thanks for always taking the time Scholar

  • Alchemist On Saturday, December 15, 2012, Alchemist (679)By person wrote:

    The first stanza is killer and I love the whole idea. You are always striking a chord.

  • Nehema On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    I have a hard time trying to write for myself, maybe the class will help... Thanks Shawn Scholar

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