Heart on the Table

By SilentStalker

Grab a steak knife from the table
Gonna show you how you did me wrong

Cut as firmly as I'm able
Please be patient love, it won't be long

Since you left my heart in tatters
Make it last just so I hear you cry

Taking yours is all that matters
What a fitting way to say good-bye...

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Published on Sunday, December 16, 2007. Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Heart on the Table"

On Thursday, March 19, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm (1580) wrote:

Yum Yum!
On Wednesday, November 28, 2012, PoetessDarkly (693) wrote:

awesome imagery. Love the dark theme. It's what we all think about but are afraid to go through with. lovely pen
On Tuesday, December 20, 2011, Devilish (2633) wrote:

Damn! Yeah you fit right in with us... In a sense... lol.. Wow!!
On Friday, July 23, 2010, Riven Waker (317) wrote:

the remnants of love - how very bleak - brilliant
On Wednesday, December 16, 2009, Dilated View (582) wrote:

Powerful. Feels like an even trade :)
On Monday, June 9, 2008, Dissolving Poet (560) wrote:

You seem to take it out better then I can, your rage sizzles hotly and boils to the deepest cores of the earth.. Hurt, it burns me so badly every time I read this.
On Wednesday, April 23, 2008, Mari (419) wrote:

this makes me sad
On Saturday, February 23, 2008, zanewill (82) wrote:

great ballad
A former member wrote: I love the format. It looks like action, then the thoughts behind it. It reminds of Stephen King somehow. And he is probably my all-time favorite author. This is powerful, intense and direct.
A former member wrote: wonderfully wicked!
A former member wrote: i fuckin love this, and i have missed reading your work. awesomeness ~Shell~
On Monday, December 17, 2007, elisa (1595) wrote:

cold.. decisive. the systematic severing of a heart. ........ a passionate murder ...with surgical precision. ...so exact... it felt bloodless. the axe man lives. nicely done.
On Monday, December 17, 2007, Aunty Depressant (423) wrote:

Gripping, cutting edge!
On Sunday, December 16, 2007, Niemand (355) wrote:

Dude... I love it. Short, but perfect.-Airi
On Sunday, December 16, 2007, veingo (526) wrote:

Now this is the kind of little ditty that could be stuck in my head for a while. ^V^
On Sunday, December 16, 2007, mysterylove (97) wrote:

short yet perfect. i always have loved your work.=)