My Daughter's Eyes

By SilentStalker

I've said so many times to you
How much you mean to me
That my love for you comes from more
Than just the things I see

And that you take the little time
To ask me how I feel...
It lets me know I'm not alone
That what we share is real

I want to give my all to you
And keep you in my life
I have you now as my best friend;
I want you as my wife

My love's grown stronger everyday
Since I first realized
That every time I look at you
I see my daughter's eyes...

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Published on Saturday, February 7, 2004. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Comments on "My Daughter's Eyes"

On Saturday, June 4, 2011, ColorMeToxic (238) wrote:

Heartbreakingly beautiful...
A former member wrote: its an osom way of words..but its like sayiong (to me of course)..that ur love reminds u of ur grandma or something..its nNOT bad..just weird to me but anyway its extremely thoughful =D
A former member wrote: beautiful ,thanks:)
On Thursday, September 18, 2008, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (106) wrote:

Wow, that's a very interesting way to tell someone of your love. I like it a lot, and thanks for sharing! -Heather-
A former member wrote: this was soo sweet
A former member wrote: Tender and heartfelt,I can feel what you felt when you were writing this, for me that's one of the best parts of poetry
On Tuesday, February 15, 2005, Dei (663) wrote:

this is wonderful Silent. you've always been a fav!
On Saturday, June 5, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (353) wrote:

..."That every time I look at you I see my daughters eyes"...*tear*...this is so beautiful..wow...Butterfly..xxx...
A former member wrote: *Tear falls* The last two lines... *breathless* WOW. I melted when I read it. Thank you... haha =-MO-=
On Sunday, March 28, 2004, Mademoiselle_Minx (108) wrote:

omgosh...ok your prob not gonna like this but can I just say how pretty this is. It just makes you feel all tingly inside...and the last two lines just finish it perfectly...awww :::skips off feeling all happy:::
A former member wrote: Darun, this was great. It's really hard to comment on something when words are not enough. Awsome man, awsome. ~Ryan
On Monday, March 21, 2005, Sin (1135) wrote:

as usual Ryans insight cant be beat so i will just echo him...this was truly amazing...just wow beautiful ~kristy
On Wednesday, March 10, 2004, Ophelia (221) wrote:

This was very lovely,tender and so very beautiful, *sighs*
A former member wrote: *still speechless* I just don't know what to say Darun...this is beautiful...
On Tuesday, February 10, 2004, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

...well, you know, I couldn't have done it without ya...
A former member wrote: *speechless*
On Monday, February 9, 2004, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

:)
On Saturday, February 7, 2004, yslehc (334) wrote:

aw, cute poem.. i like it lots
On Saturday, February 7, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (340) wrote:

that is very very sweet poem....unrelenting passion and honesty displayed here...-l-
On Saturday, February 7, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467) wrote:

Awwwwwwwe!!!!!!! I love the way this ends (I like it all actually). When you have a daughter of your own I think things like this tug at your heart.