My Love(My Axe)

By SilentStalker

The sunlight yet won't treat me well
It feels like I've escaped from Hell
Again, it's sad to leave the smell
Of cold, decaying flesh

But new young women fill the street
Dressed beautifully from head to feet
Their skin so bright, their scent so sweet
It truly does refresh

And so, my love, we go again
Please come with me once more, my friend
Your faith in me could never bend
Or break in any way

And I will swing, and you will slice
If once won't work, we'll do it twice
Let's see how many we can dice
In just a single day

So beautiful, her face, her lips
Her fingers, toes, her legs and hips
I want to watch her as she rips
And bows before your blade

And after that, we'll search for more
This thirst of ours we can't ignore
Please join me on this bloody tour
To find all that have strayed

And she will kick, and she will crawl
And you will slash, and she will fall
And she will join the list of all
The killings we have done

And so, my love, now let us go
It's time to give this street a show
Oh, which to choose? Oh yes, I know
Let,s start off with that one!

Ah yes, another killing spree
The fear that they display for me
Yes, this has been our destiny
To put them to their end

The street now lifeless, blood is splattered
Limbs are severed, flesh is scattered
But as if it ever mattered
They'll be back again

But until then, let's go inside
They soon won't feel the need to hide
I'll place you gently by my side
For now, we'll just stay here

And now we'll wait until the day
That they forget to run away
And we shall come back out to play
And have such fun, my dear

So now begins a brand new morn
The living free; the dead are mourned
And we shall be no longer scorned
Forgotten is our crime

Yes, look at what a home we've made
With trinkets from the last crusade
So let us go; our path is laid
We'll get some more this time

The sunlight yet won't treat me well
It feels like I've escaped from Hell
Again, it's sad to leave the smell
Of cold, decaying flesh

But new young women fill the street
Dressed beautifully from head to feet
Their skin so bright, their scent so sweet
It truly does refresh.....

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Copyright 2003 Darun Ferguson
Published on Monday, October 6, 2003.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Very nice horror writing!.. I love this kind of pieces!.. Very well penned.. :)

  • candy meet baby On Wednesday, January 8, 2014, candy meet baby (43)By person wrote:

    Very fun to read. I love horror. Good job

  • BrokenTether On Thursday, April 21, 2011, BrokenTether (27)By person wrote:

    Love the rhythm and how the first stanzas are repeated in the end. Really gives it a sense of endless cycling.

  • HeadpatSlut On Saturday, July 10, 2010, HeadpatSlut (307)By person wrote:

    An Entrancing and psychopathic write Stalker, I like the rhyme scheme, vivid images of bloody murders, I love it. >:) Thanks for posting Hatchet love man, Whoop Whoop! \m/ Scholar

  • elisa On Friday, August 10, 2007, elisa (1637)By person wrote:

    Poe, incarnate...... with a splash or two of blood...... which i love of course...... The Axe, your lover.... split the flesh and share the sacrifice.... pure and brutal. i love ...

  • xserratedsoulx On Sunday, February 5, 2006, xserratedsoulx (214)By person wrote:

    i'm scensing a pattern with this whole ax thing... ~lauren~

  • Northstar On Monday, July 19, 2004, Northstar (387)By person wrote:

    this is a really eerie piece--I love it because the rhythm and flow are so soft and sweet, yet the words are talking of murderous sprees--nicely done

  • Juggalotus On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, Juggalotus (69)By person wrote:

    Reminds me of something....oh yeah,"My axe is my buddy.." Ahhh, the Insane Clown Posse.I like the description, I can see the bloddy axe and mutilated corpses

  • SilentStalker On Thursday, October 16, 2003, SilentStalker (1091)By person wrote:

    ...and I am the man to give you axe poetry...just ask all my other buddies...hehe...thanks. Scholar

  • Crystal Passion On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, Crystal Passion (222)By person wrote:

    such a heartwarming tale about a boy and his axe... it's more classic than lassie!

  • yslehc On Monday, October 6, 2003, yslehc (340)By person wrote:

    that was cool.. i love the way it rhymed, good job

  • A former member wrote: Aww nice. There's nothing sweeter than spending some time with a lover on a Bonney and Clyde style killing spree. Touching:p ~Urban Shipwreck~

  • A former member wrote: "Chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop" Now put this in the background as you read this poem. Funny, no? I love your rhyme schemes...have I ever mentioned that?

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