My Love(My Axe)
By SilentStalker
The sunlight yet won't treat me well
It feels like I've escaped from
Hell
Again, it's sad to leave the smell
Of cold, decaying
flesh
But new young women fill the street
Dressed beautifully
from head to feet
Their skin so bright, their scent so sweet
It truly does refresh
And so, my love, we go again
Please come with me once more, my friend
Your faith in me could
never bend
Or break in any way
And I will swing, and
you will slice
If once won't work, we'll do it twice
Let's
see how many we can dice
In just a single day
So beautiful,
her face, her lips
Her fingers, toes, her legs and hips
I
want to watch her as she rips
And bows before your blade
And after that, we'll search for more
This thirst of ours we
can't ignore
Please join me on this bloody tour
To find all
that have strayed
And she will kick, and she will crawl
And you will slash, and she will fall
And she will join the list
of all
The killings we have done
And so, my love, now
let us go
It's time to give this street a show
Oh, which to
choose? Oh yes, I know
Let,s start off with that one!
Ah yes, another killing spree
The fear that they display for
me
Yes, this has been our destiny
To put them to their end
The street now lifeless, blood is splattered
Limbs are
severed, flesh is scattered
But as if it ever mattered
They'll
be back again
But until then, let's go inside
They
soon won't feel the need to hide
I'll place you gently by my side
For now, we'll just stay here
And now we'll wait until
the day
That they forget to run away
And we shall come back
out to play
And have such fun, my dear
So now begins
a brand new morn
The living free; the dead are mourned
And
we shall be no longer scorned
Forgotten is our crime
Yes, look at what a home we've made
With trinkets from the last crusade
So let us go; our path is laid
We'll get some more this time
The sunlight yet won't treat me well
It feels like I've
escaped from Hell
Again, it's sad to leave the smell
Of cold,
decaying flesh
But new young women fill the street
Dressed beautifully from head to feet
Their skin so bright, their
scent so sweet
It truly does refresh.....
Awards
Comments on "My Love(My Axe)"
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A former member wrote:
Very nice horror writing!.. I love this kind of pieces!.. Very well penned.. :)
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A former member wrote:
Very fun to read. I love horror. Good job
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A former member wrote:
Love the rhythm and how the first stanzas are repeated in the end. Really gives it a sense of endless cycling.
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On Saturday, July 10, 2010, HeadpatSlut
(257) wrote:
An Entrancing and psychopathic write Stalker, I like the rhyme scheme, vivid images of bloody murders, I love it. >:) Thanks for posting Hatchet love man, Whoop Whoop! \m/
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On Friday, August 10, 2007, elisa
(1595) wrote:
Poe, incarnate...... with a splash or two of blood...... which i love of course...... The Axe, your lover.... split the flesh and share the sacrifice.... pure and brutal. i love ...
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On Sunday, February 5, 2006, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
i'm scensing a pattern with this whole ax thing... ~lauren~
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On Monday, July 19, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
this is a really eerie piece--I love it because the rhythm and flow are so soft and sweet, yet the words are talking of murderous sprees--nicely done
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On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, Juggalotus
(69) wrote:
Reminds me of something....oh yeah,"My axe is my buddy.." Ahhh, the Insane Clown Posse.I like the description, I can see the bloddy axe and mutilated corpses
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On Thursday, October 16, 2003, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...and I am the man to give you axe poetry...just ask all my other buddies...hehe...thanks.
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On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
such a heartwarming tale about a boy and his axe... it's more classic than lassie!
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On Monday, October 6, 2003, yslehc
(334) wrote:
that was cool.. i love the way it rhymed, good job
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A former member wrote:
Aww nice. There's nothing sweeter than spending some time with a lover on a Bonney and Clyde style killing spree. Touching:p ~Urban Shipwreck~
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A former member wrote:
"Chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop" Now put this in the background as you read this poem. Funny, no? I love your rhyme schemes...have I ever mentioned that?