Nightside Rapture ( feat. the awesome Melankolia)

By Malice In Wonderland

She danced like the shadow,
Moved like the wind.
With every jagged movement
She cut deeper than skin.

twisting the edges of cognitive thought
she was
the apex
of my inequities
gilded and cold

Mirrored cloudspark,
Portent enigma now
Creating the night anew
In each ragged breath

her breath
was my aria
speaking in constellation allegory
weaving the milky way into her lashes
we grasped at the corners of enlightenment

She drags the Light from the day
Feeding Darkness sublime
While around her, angels fall
Her gilded wings stolen...

crumbled
into stardust
scattered to the ends
of
un.creation
falling
flightless
into the blistered sands
of the unknown

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Copyright 2014 Rain In The Willows
Published on Sunday, February 23, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

A Collaboration that was much enjoyed, thank you, Mr. Melankolia. :)
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  • Void Vortex On Wednesday, April 23, 2014, Void Vortex (298)By person wrote:

    Wow. The descriptions and metaphors are crazy! Only one word comes to mind right now. Epic! 

  • soul_versing On Friday, February 28, 2014, soul_versing (774)By person wrote:

    I love (.) kya you take my breath away with sheer detail, and Mel you are stunning with depth. Epic piece hands down. Sizzle-sizzle. Scholar

  • Syncretism On Tuesday, February 25, 2014, Syncretism (34)By person wrote:

    Very nice guys! Loved reading this. Great write!

  • A former member wrote: otherwordly. a exotic blend of auras, voices, and a shared vision. you both dream so lucidly. many thanks for sharing.

  • Melankolia On Sunday, February 23, 2014, Melankolia (46)By person wrote:

    Was a pleasure collaborating with you. Your mind reaches far, your pen further. Honored to have the chance to share this hour with you in this endeavor. You've got this, and more.

  • Malice In Wonderland On Sunday, February 23, 2014, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    psh, pleasure was mine. its nice to see us getting some newbies with talent! Scholar

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