the Spaces Between Breathing

By Malice In Wonderland

flickering

we held our souls
aloft and shaded
from an errant breeze

starsoaked skins
shedding
in lunar lulabye

Breeding concrete convictions
we stayed silent
the whole way home

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Published on Monday, January 27, 2014. Filed under: "Poetry"

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February 26th, 2014

Comments on "the Spaces Between Breathing"

On Friday, July 14, 2017, worm (1149) wrote:

I found this jewel clicking through random poems... Very Nice! ~worm~
On Sunday, March 23, 2014, megaprime81 (740) wrote:

Impressive; short n' sweet, a beautiful write. 10
On Tuesday, March 4, 2014, BetaWolfinVA (791) wrote:

loved this, very well done :)
A former member wrote: My brother james(Dejected_Worth) told me to look you up and im so glad i did, this piece is very deserving of POTD. Thank you for gracing me with your well placed words. -Justin Craven (13JC)
On Wednesday, February 26, 2014, hazydaisy (128) wrote:

i wish i could bookmark this. one of the best things i've read on here in the longest.
On Wednesday, February 26, 2014, Leineco (59) wrote:

inexplicably compelling
A former member wrote: Ive come to find its those moments that "say" the most...
On Monday, January 27, 2014, heroineyes (111) wrote:

i loved the way you brought it home at the end...