By Malice In Wonderland

constellation bound
we found solace
star soaked
and bleeding
in muddy Mississippi

dripping from the trees
a pearlescent puddle
reborn of intention

washed ashore
we showed them
in asphyxiation

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Copyright 2013 Ashe
Published on Thursday, August 8, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, December 6, 2016, carlosjackal (2650)By person wrote:

    Each word holds equal weight and meaning and each word feels like it is sworn to secrecy on a tale where truth is stranger than fiction. Compelling and much enjoyed!

  • A former member wrote: Is death beautiful? I believe you have made it so in the words above... and a shared death no less, again beautiful...

  • BetaWolfinVA On Sunday, August 11, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (810)By person wrote:

    interesting... sounds like there was a backstory? Scholar

  • Star On Saturday, August 10, 2013, Star (1013)By person wrote:

    Breathtakingly amazing as always. Good luck on the contest. (:

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Thursday, August 8, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (359)By person wrote:

    Beautifully written... The last stanza was breath-taking :) Good luck xoxo

  • A former member wrote: those last two..... did funny things to my heart. i really hope you win. this is fucking stellar. poignant and pregnant with meaning.

  • blue angel On Thursday, August 8, 2013, blue angel (906)By person wrote:

    Outstanding inking !! Very well done ;)~

  • andhaka On Thursday, August 8, 2013, andhaka (180)By person wrote:

    You're flow to this piece is impeccable. It was like gliding on a cloud, just so easily moving along. Beautiful poem.

  • bobbery On Thursday, August 8, 2013, bobbery (124)By person wrote:

    beautifull horror

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