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Overdose.
By Malice In Wonderland
i.
constellation bound
we found solace
star soaked
and bleeding
in muddy Mississippi
ii.
dripping from the trees
a pearlescent puddle
reborn of intention
iii.
washed ashore
we showed them
beauty
in asphyxiation
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Copyright 2013 Ashe
Published on Thursday, August 8, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, December 6, 2016, carlosjackal
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wrote:
Each word holds equal weight and meaning and each word feels like it is sworn to secrecy on a tale where truth is stranger than fiction. Compelling and much enjoyed!
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A former member wrote:
Is death beautiful? I believe you have made it so in the words above... and a shared death no less, again beautiful...
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On Sunday, August 11, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
interesting... sounds like there was a backstory?
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On Saturday, August 10, 2013, Star
(920) wrote:
Breathtakingly amazing as always. Good luck on the contest. (:
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On Thursday, August 8, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx
(334) wrote:
Beautifully written... The last stanza was breath-taking :) Good luck xoxo
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A former member wrote:
those last two..... did funny things to my heart. i really hope you win. this is fucking stellar. poignant and pregnant with meaning.
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On Thursday, August 8, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
Outstanding inking !! Very well done ;)~
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On Thursday, August 8, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
You're flow to this piece is impeccable. It was like gliding on a cloud, just so easily moving along. Beautiful poem.
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On Thursday, August 8, 2013, bobbery
(124) wrote:
beautifull horror
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