Robin's Song
By lupus tenebrae
Branches drip in patterned beat,
melting
from the winter sun,
fragile to such rampant heat.
Nature’s
cleansing is now done,
white has fallen prey to green,
melting
from the winter sun,
Leaves sporting their lively sheen,
robins sing my mother’s name,
white has fallen prey to green.
Still I hang my head in shame,
crying tears of mourning dew,
robins sing my mother’s name.
The robins sing fondly of
you,
ender of my winter grieving,
crying tears of mourning dew.
When I mourn my mother’s leaving,
branches drip in patterned
beat.
Ender of my winter grieving,
fragile to such rampant
heat.
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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Author's Note:
*Repost* I'm sure someone remembers this, and I couldn't bear removing it again, this piece belongs here, with me.Awards
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On Tuesday, December 6, 2016, carlosjackal
(2786) wrote:
This was a wonderfully tight, woven piece that sings to a grieving heartbeat, each line literally dripping with the loss of your dearly departed mother. Very well done.
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A former member wrote:
A very beautiful and deep piece.. The emotions you evoke are very palpable and a feeling of melancholy embraces the heart.. And your title reminds me of a song from one of my favorites Bands:Haggard... This work deserved to be that poem of the day.. Congratulations! :)
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On Thursday, July 24, 2014, blue angel
(866) wrote:
Deep grievance with stunningly beautiful imagery :) Congratulations for receiving 'Poem of the Day Award'. !!
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On Wednesday, May 8, 2013, Nehema
(958) wrote:
A beautiful piece, I'm very glad you put it back here - XXOO
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On Sunday, January 20, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Branches drip in patterned beat.. i love this. and you by far remain the master.
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On Saturday, March 24, 2012, JadedHeart
(18) wrote:
Wow!! This is amazing. Your words transported me.
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On Friday, March 23, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Indeed it does Wolfie, most exceptional, thanks.
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On Friday, March 23, 2012, ColorMeToxic
(238) wrote:
You're right, it does belong here...I am so glad you decided to re-post this piece. It is an absolutely stunning piece. Beautiful and powerful and so much more. Thank you.