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...particulate expiration...
By NikesRain
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tempests come
in mercy
dejected
entreating
this strand
.
broken
thrown
pearls scattered
.
defective
fallen
crushed
unchecked
.
dismissed
forsaken
projected luminescence
.
mistaken
failed
zephyr descend
extricate
useless dust
.
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On Wednesday, June 1, 2011, Malice In Wonderland
(987)
wrote:
I've missed this place, for just this, so much... it's good to be home:) This is lovely...
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A former member wrote:
I saw a necklace..... torn from its rightfully adorned... every last mother's orb...... ticking against the floor.... and slipping into the frayed corners and forgotten hollows of the once discarded.... I saw this event... this expiration of sorts... this final loss.... pearls like marbles .... just slowly rolling into the abyss.... another one of life's momentous gifts.... ripped to shreds..... I saw this here.... and I had to turn away....*bows before the rafter goddess*
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A former member wrote:
this is so pained... you breathe in moonlight and paint with the bruises of a suffering sky...tempestuous, indeed...you are a wonder.
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On Thursday, January 27, 2011, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
no i think it is you that is the wonder, i'm just here treading water watching you shine, but thank you -snuggles
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On Tuesday, January 25, 2011, ubiquitoussoul
(346) wrote:
I don't use the word beautiful lightly when I read this poem.. once again your use of imagery blew me away as a tempest.. almost felt like an abortion of life..dust in the cosmos.. was once never again to breathe..floating infinitely in a wide blank space of memory ..pulled under the oceans of a mute world..under pearl sun.. in the blue ink of jellyfish poisoned.. well thanks for the read..excellent
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On Thursday, January 27, 2011, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
thank you for the time you took to read and take this in... i think your comment probably far outdid the write, but it's appreciated very much
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