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Curbstomp.
By Malice In Wonderland
rain
pours
like the frail
tapping
of junkie nails.on
busted concrete
blistered
and bleeding
we crept on
sheets
of blackened ice
skirting
the apex
of
solar
storm
infatuation
brushing leadened lips
behind opened palms
and closed hearts
straining
glossified
glass doll pupils
screaming in shades
of blue flame aria
my ashen lips
crumble at the touch
necrosis lined
fingertips
drawing wicked redline
convictions
across a sunken
crater chest
playing over rib bones like a xylophone
dressing
poison tongued
in tigerlily lullabye
the knife sticking
out of your chest
is only a further testament
of
love
and sanity
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Copyright 2012 Rain In The Willows
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On Sunday, April 9, 2017, Lux
(299)
wrote:
This was well deserved, my darling. Your Eric pieces are still my favorite, but lort. This one reminds me of empty aching.
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On Sunday, April 9, 2017, beamish
(137) wrote:
Absolutely amazing
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On Thursday, December 27, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
(795) wrote:
Finately the place for this... such imagry... I got lostin the flow
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A former member wrote:
You should know that I've read this many, many times....
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On Monday, October 8, 2012, Guillotine
(172) wrote:
'is only a further testament / of / love and sanity' - killer finisher; such evocative and haunting images portrayed in this. The metaphor is your bitch.
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On Tuesday, October 2, 2012, haunted
(849) wrote:
damn willow the visuals are fantastic in your poem. this must have been deep but very fun to write. you should be proud cause this is fantastically written. wow! awesome!
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On Tuesday, October 2, 2012, Dreamless
(19) wrote:
I've missed your writing, immensely. There's so much desolation here. Beautiful.
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On Tuesday, October 2, 2012, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
love and sanity... two hard things to put together... great imagery here nice piece indeed
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A former member wrote:
this is hot...gave me visuals...i was able to see the junkie nails and fingers dancing across the ribcage...i love pieces like this that have dirt and grime in them...i can picture a nive lil vid shorts with someone acting this out...thumbs up rain
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On Tuesday, October 2, 2012, Star
(919) wrote:
wow just wow.. the visuals are great... well done rain (:
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