Triolet #2: It Hurt to Say Goodbye

By SilentStalker

I had a girl with auburn hair
It hurt me so to say goodbye
She always said she would be there
I had a girl with auburn hair

But when she had that grand affair
She knew that she would have to die
I had a girl with auburn hair
It hurt me so to say goodbye

*I think I'm enjoying this format a bit; I expect to start using this style quite often in future poems*

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Published on Tuesday, February 7, 2006. Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Triolet #2: It Hurt to Say Goodbye"

On Sunday, June 5, 2011, Virgils Vigil (74) wrote:

Cool structure. I'll have to give it a try. Thanks
A former member wrote: Simple. Lovelorn. Brilliant
On Saturday, April 29, 2006, CharlottesWeb (509) wrote:

Ooohh...aahhh....very nice. Very Nick Cave! I likes.
On Monday, April 17, 2006, vaultgrl (185) wrote:

.....thank god i'm blonde.....haha.....
On Thursday, February 9, 2006, yslehc (334) wrote:

yeah i like the format too, it's different. and you do it oh so well :P
On Wednesday, February 8, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560) wrote:

o.O that was intensely interesting
On Wednesday, February 8, 2006, Army Barbie (316) wrote:

Haha, I think Ship is better at it than you...(kidding of course.) This style works for ya. Clap clap clap clap clap -Court
A former member wrote: I had a stalker sent away It sucks he cannot be around He got bitch moved by the Army I had a stalker sent away But Army had no time to pray His axe in hand they begged more time I had a stalker sent away He got bitch moved by the Army
On Wednesday, February 8, 2006, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

We had a stalker whisked away; We all knew what he had to do; He promised he'd be here to stay; we had a stalker whisked away; But then the Army had to say; "his twisted mind we never knew"; we had a stalker whisked away; We all knew what he had to do
On Tuesday, February 7, 2006, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

heheh. Can't seem to help the wicked grin on my face. Very nicely constructed; melodic sociopathy... I really enjoyed it. >:)
A former member wrote: so simple, yet it says so much... I like this ~A~