Comments by Virgils Vigil

"The dedication and devotion is love, but not to love itself, which often abandons us. More so an impeccable knowledge that may never be attained, but forever lustfully pursued."
Posted by Virgils Vigil on "In Devotion Towards All" by Virgils Vigil

"The title is meant to be partially self-refuting. What is ugly? Thank you for enjoying."
Posted by Virgils Vigil on "An Ugly Thought" by Virgils Vigil

"I never meant to imply they are opposites. Very much the contrary in fact. Thanks for commenting."
Posted by Virgils Vigil on "This = That" by Virgils Vigil

"Thank you. I appreciate the support."
Posted by Virgils Vigil on "The Searching" by Virgils Vigil

"Yes. Very much in the same vein as Where Is My Mind. Pixies are amazing."
Posted by Virgils Vigil on "There Goes My Brain" by Virgils Vigil

"Potent opening line. Well written."
Posted by Virgils Vigil on "Divinations" by DescendingDown

"This is a sweet little piece. Writing when you can't sleep is the best. You get lovely gems such as this as a result. Write on."
Posted by Virgils Vigil on "Insomniac Nonsense" by brokensme

"This is great. Any text about text is a favorite text of mine. This is a wonderful ode-esk piece that fittingly flows from end to end. Well written. Write on."
Posted by Virgils Vigil on "Turn the Page" by Lawless Fighter

"This is a great write. A powerful rush. My only criticism is the final line. I don't know if it is a typo or intentional, but I would rather read it as either "ready to live" or "read for life". Either would be a fantastic final line and an impactful end to an impactful poem. Write on. "
Posted by Virgils Vigil on "Dead Girl!" by M Morgan

"A wonderful race through the mind. At times the broken words slow the reader down from otherwise perfect pacing. W a v e s and p i e c e s are good examples of that. Other times it is used very artistically and helps synchronize fluidity. C r a s h is my favorite. You might consider some editing, but being high can create feelings of sudden starts and stops, so it may fit best as is. Keep up the good work."
Posted by Virgils Vigil on "Taffy Bullet" by FearlessDragon

"Yes. Read it on the trip down, wrote this on the trip back."
Posted by Virgils Vigil on "'Nature'@30,000ft.com" by Virgils Vigil

"It's supposed to be both to be honest. So I put an Å“ there to settle it all. Thanks."
Posted by Virgils Vigil on "The Vase (A Premature Burial of Self)" by Virgils Vigil

"I actually wrote this a while back"
Posted by Virgils Vigil on "Before The Fall" by Virgils Vigil

"I know a lot of ballerinas. This is a great write. Thanks."
Posted by Virgils Vigil on "Dear Ballerina" by rosemaiden

"Thanks. That's my favorite line as well."
Posted by Virgils Vigil on "A Clown" by Virgils Vigil

"A delicate use of 20 words that accomplishes so much. Nice work."
Posted by Virgils Vigil on "You see right through me" by ColorMeToxic

"They're spirits of the night, manifestations of ourselves, or simply inspirational deities to pour our stains upon. Insightful piece."
Posted by Virgils Vigil on "Stain;" by whisperingwalls

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