Taffy Bullet

By FearlessDragon

Riding the W S of the beat
A E
V


Lights flicker and flash
Roadways of electric flame
Guide the way
Treble seduces my brain
Enter through the lion's void
C a h into eternity
r s

Keep the beat going!

B e a m s of light surrounding
"Boom Boom Boom!"
Echo in the night
Ecstacy ignites

Body heat!

Glow worm's coil
Follows my path
Green jets explode
Glass pavement rocks and twists
Multi - Colored wet dream turns
Black hole ahead

No reality!

Time warps carry us into the horizon
"Bass Bass"! Skips my heart
Sweat drenches into a sea
Everlasting purity
y
k
Swimming into the s

I take my ride!

Bouncing outer space rips me to shreds

Simply crystallized p i e c   e s


I Illuminate the darkness
Mutate into human form
Shooooooooooting--------> star superman
Forsakes oblivion in his rear view

The mind awakens in a taffy bullet
Colliding with its own existence

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Published on Thursday, January 31, 2013. Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Ok, so i'm a little high...

Comments on "Taffy Bullet"

A former member wrote: This is excellent.. I love it... as always! lines 9-12 are my fave. Very niice good sir! :))
On Thursday, January 31, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276) wrote:

Driving away ........... Into your own head space. Loved the creation of shapes with words that have a strong link throughout. Creating forward movement created by your imagery! Amazballs sweet. X x x
On Thursday, January 31, 2013, Stephanie Sideways (276) wrote:

Great forwards movement I mean. I bobbed up on that first wave, by the way. X
On Thursday, January 31, 2013, Virgils Vigil (74) wrote:

A wonderful race through the mind. At times the broken words slow the reader down from otherwise perfect pacing. W a v e s and p i e c e s are good examples of that. Other times it is used very artistically and helps synchronize fluidity. C r a s h is my favorite. You might consider some editing, but being high can create feelings of sudden starts and stops, so it may fit best as is. Keep up the good work.