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of Mood Rings and a Childhood Memory (Lost)
By Malice In Wonderland
You always liked mood rings.
I remembered that,
Looking through
my jewelry the other day.
Gently slipping,
A cold metal circlet,
Upon my finger.
I dreamed.
Just a 50 cent trinket
Ment so much to us
You gave me this
When we were 7.
Unaware...
All the colors...
Turning,
Unfurling,
Believing,
Colors would tell our moods...
Cuz I loved
you,
And you loved me...
And of course,
We would marry.
My best friend...
But a childhood memory now lost
10
years passed
And I find
Myself
Praying,
Aching,
To believe
This color
Will prove our love...
Once More....
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Copyright 2004 Kya
Published on Saturday, June 26, 2004.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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On Monday, April 1, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(791)
wrote:
This one is so beautiful, yet sad - thought i had seen all of yours - looks like i have some more good reading to do :)
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A former member wrote:
Really i love this. But one thing i am unable to understand as to why, these days, forms and rules have been altogather divorced. Has poetry also become free like sex.
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On Thursday, April 25, 2013, Alchemist
(679) wrote:
This guy made a similar comment on my poem of the day and on his profile he says he is a lawyer and teacher but continually makes spelling and punctuation errors. I don't mind constructive criticism but he told me I should rewrite and try next time. And I wont tell you how "good" his poetry is, anyways not to ramble but this guy is a joke and this was a wonderful work hence why it received poem of the day, I only have two questions for this guy have you never heard of free form poetry and how do you not know how to write a haiku when your a damn teacher, that is all, lol.
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On Monday, April 1, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
Poetry is as the poet wills, some are bound by structure as with a straight jacket, others don a different set of clothes as the mood shifts.
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On Thursday, February 21, 2013, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
if you were looking for structure, my page isn't a gopd one for you. feel free to look at many other writers who use structure, such as silent stalker or amaryllis. thanks for an unessacery and generic comment ;)
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On Thursday, February 21, 2013, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
good, rather*
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A former member wrote:
i liked it i use to love mood rings. it reminded me of my childhood
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A former member wrote:
sad,sweet, and yet it warms my heart.... great write there! keep up the great work
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On Monday, August 29, 2011, punk mc cool
(74) wrote:
this touches me, cracks my heart open.
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On Saturday, August 25, 2007, Simply Me
(40) wrote:
So sweet and sad at the same time. I'll remember this the next time I see a mood ring.
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On Monday, July 11, 2005, Dysphoria
(88) wrote:
Wow..this just breaks my heart, the regret and sorrow in this are overwhelming, beautiful write. -Justina
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On Sunday, January 2, 2005, Cinn
(152) wrote:
This was so sad, but the emotions made this poem that much better. Great write. -Cinn
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On Thursday, December 23, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
this was too beautiful, the regret and the longing that genuinely pierces through my heart, nice work sweetness
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On Wednesday, July 21, 2004, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
*cries* this was so painful. I have felt this very sting. You express it fluidly. Good write. -Glass
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On Sunday, July 18, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
who is he, and when can I kill him?~Mikey 'L'
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On Sunday, July 18, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
On a more serious note, this is a great write. The description is wonderful, but I still maintain I should kil him.
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On Thursday, July 8, 2004, JiNx
(98) wrote:
Just got one the other day... Interesting.... Good memories too. Good write -Jinxie
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A former member wrote:
Oh yes, mood rings have definatly changed in my eyes as well. This is a wonderful peice. -Lauren
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A former member wrote:
this beautiful but at place i felt you didnt work as hard but thats me being a dog that im..beautiful write
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On Sunday, June 27, 2004, DarkNTormented
(11) wrote:
this is beautiful it almost made me cry...*dark*
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On Saturday, June 26, 2004, hate_doll
(263) wrote:
it made me look at my mood ring and smile and sigh...I really liked this...brava...
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On Saturday, June 26, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
wow,this is painful and heartfelt very nice~ss
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