Missing You

By SilentStalker


Here I lie down so blue on so sleepless a night,
As I can't fall asleep as I turn out the light;
For the sole thing I thought as you slipped out of sight
Was the time I was missing with you.

I remember me watching you walking away,
And forgetting the words that I wanted to say.
I tried thinking of something to tell you each day,
When a simple "I miss you" would do.

But each time that I see you, the words just won't come,
And I just utter nonsense and sound like I'm dumb.
And my hands start to shake, and my fingers get numb,
And I walk away feeling ashamed.

But I want to embrace you and tell you I care;
That my heart wants to break when I'm here and you're there,
And that seeing you leave is a thought I can't bear,
For I'd only have myself to blame.

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Copyright 2003 Darun Ferguson
Published on Wednesday, September 24, 2003.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Bluegirl On Thursday, September 14, 2006, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    Aww, this is so sweet :) It makes me smile.

  • LovelyAssassinx On Saturday, February 12, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (151)By person wrote:

    This is a wonderful poem. lol. I tend to write about love and heartbreak often...so I relate a lot. great write. ~Unlucky

  • Sticky Kitty On Sunday, February 6, 2005, Sticky Kitty (241)By person wrote:

    worw crushed my heart i loved it -kitty

  • A former member wrote: Oh, this is heartbreaking.

  • blackdarkness On Monday, July 19, 2004, blackdarkness (227)By person wrote:

    awwww...i feel this way all the time! *tears*

  • Moodswing On Wednesday, November 5, 2003, Moodswing (63)By person wrote:

    *wipes a tear* brings to mind a song.."I forgot, to tell you I love you" Its odd to see a member of the male species admit their emotions, but you do it so effortlessly.

  • Silver Spectre On Saturday, October 18, 2003, Silver Spectre (95)By person wrote:

    when all is said and done it is love that we want so why not write about it. And i think all us men know how dumb we get when in the company of a woman that just blows us away...I am with you on this write...well done..Silver

  • eternal despair On Sunday, October 12, 2003, eternal despair (66)By person wrote:

    that one hit hard, i can reallt relate to it. thanx for recommending that one. i love it

  • Rebel_Angel On Saturday, September 27, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    I really like this! I think it is a great write.

  • Delilah On Thursday, September 25, 2003, Delilah (113)By person wrote:

    I know how this feels, I like this one..we all have a heart somewhere...~Delilah~

  • A former member wrote: Heh...I had to come back and read this again...I do so love this poem. *sigh*

  • TheMistressBucket On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, TheMistressBucket (18)By person wrote:

    Oh my Goddess...This is so sweet. What I wouldn't give to have someone feel that way for me, and to write it so eloquently. *Touched*

  • angelunderneath On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, angelunderneath (60)By person wrote:

    No, not dark, but sad, none the less an enjoyable read

  • A former member wrote: Awww...so you can be all mushy huh? I really like the rhyme structure of this one. It flowed so smoothly. It was just beautiful...really. I think I might even read it again :)

  • A former member wrote: I agree, the I liked the rhyme scheme. And just keep in mind that "dark" is a pretty loose term, in my mind, for anything that pains our souls. Great heartfelt write. ~Urban Shipwreck~

  • SilentStalker On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    You're too good to me. Really. Scholar

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