Missing You
By SilentStalker
Here I lie down so blue on so sleepless a night,
As I can't
fall asleep as I turn out the light;
For the sole thing I thought
as you slipped out of sight
Was the time I was missing with you.
I remember me watching you walking away,
And forgetting
the words that I wanted to say.
I tried thinking of something to
tell you each day,
When a simple "I miss you" would do.
But each time that I see you, the words just won't come,
And I
just utter nonsense and sound like I'm dumb.
And my hands start
to shake, and my fingers get numb,
And I walk away feeling ashamed.
But I want to embrace you and tell you I care;
That my
heart wants to break when I'm here and you're there,
And that seeing
you leave is a thought I can't bear,
For I'd only have myself to
blame.
Comments on "Missing You"
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On Thursday, September 14, 2006, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
Aww, this is so sweet :) It makes me smile.
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On Saturday, February 12, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151) wrote:
This is a wonderful poem. lol. I tend to write about love and heartbreak often...so I relate a lot. great write. ~Unlucky
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On Sunday, February 6, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
worw crushed my heart i loved it -kitty
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A former member wrote:
Oh, this is heartbreaking.
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On Monday, July 19, 2004, blackdarkness
(227) wrote:
awwww...i feel this way all the time! *tears*
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On Wednesday, November 5, 2003, Moodswing
(63) wrote:
*wipes a tear* brings to mind a song.."I forgot, to tell you I love you" Its odd to see a member of the male species admit their emotions, but you do it so effortlessly.
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On Saturday, October 18, 2003, Silver Spectre
(95) wrote:
when all is said and done it is love that we want so why not write about it. And i think all us men know how dumb we get when in the company of a woman that just blows us away...I am with you on this write...well done..Silver
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On Sunday, October 12, 2003, eternal despair
(66) wrote:
that one hit hard, i can reallt relate to it. thanx for recommending that one. i love it
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On Saturday, September 27, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I really like this! I think it is a great write.
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On Thursday, September 25, 2003, Delilah
(113) wrote:
I know how this feels, I like this one..we all have a heart somewhere...~Delilah~
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A former member wrote:
Heh...I had to come back and read this again...I do so love this poem. *sigh*
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On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, TheMistressBucket
(18) wrote:
Oh my Goddess...This is so sweet. What I wouldn't give to have someone feel that way for me, and to write it so eloquently. *Touched*
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On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, angelunderneath
(60) wrote:
No, not dark, but sad, none the less an enjoyable read
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A former member wrote:
Awww...so you can be all mushy huh? I really like the rhyme structure of this one. It flowed so smoothly. It was just beautiful...really. I think I might even read it again :)
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A former member wrote:
I agree, the I liked the rhyme scheme. And just keep in mind that "dark" is a pretty loose term, in my mind, for anything that pains our souls. Great heartfelt write. ~Urban Shipwreck~
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On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
You're too good to me. Really.