Stalker
By SilentStalker
I've tracked you down for many days;
I've followed you through alleyways.
You haven't even seen me yet,
But when you do, you won't forget.
I wanted you first at the store;
I saw you there five times before.
And you were always all alone;
And now I want you for my own.
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So here we are my lovely one;
My suffering has just begun.
Where do you live? I want to know;
I do not know yet where to go.
I follow close behind your car;
You do not even go too far.
You stop off quick to get some gas;
I watch you every time you pass.
You do not even notice me.
How lucky could I ever be?
But maybe you just didn't care
To try to see me sitting there.
And now the pain; you love me not.
My face is red; my head is hot.
Just go home now and you will see
The punishment for shunning me.
So now you're home; and I am too.
I park my car away from you.
I sneak up as you go inside;
You do not know how hard I cried.
The sky is dark; it's getting late.
It's hurting worse the more I wait.
But nonetheless, this much I knew;
I had to get in there with you.
I quietly unlock the door;
I tiptoe softly on the floor.
I hide, completely from your sight.
I wait till you turn out the light.
You're all undressed and fast asleep.
Your snoring shows your slumber's deep.
And all my patience now is lost;
I must have you at any cost.
And here we are my lovely one;
My suffering will soon be done.
In just a moment, you'll be mine,
And everything will turn out fine.
I kiss you once to show my love,
Once more to thank the stars above,
And last to give you all my best,
Before I send your soul to rest.
I grab a pillow from the bed.
I press it down over your head.
You wake up, flailing in distress;
I hold your arms down on your chest.
You cannot swing; you cannot scream.
I tell you that it's just a dream.
Go back to sleep; don't try to fight.
You will not get away tonight.
And so it's done; my task is through.
I lie down in the bed with you.
I hold you in my arms gently;
I only want you next to me.
I run my hands across your face.
Your hair I stroke; your lips I taste.
You're still so warm; you smell so sweet.
I brush my toes across your feet.
On top of you I feel delight.
But something just does not seem right.
You can't even return a kiss;
Will I not know what pleasure is?
But so is fate; I will not cry.
Yet still I question myself why.
I leave you there upon your bed;
The only love I had is dead.
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And though my pain is all but gone,
I have my faith to carry on.
I'll try to find somebody new;
I hope that she will be like you.
Yet this time I will not forget
That killing only brings regret.
But how else will I take her heart
Without tearing my own apart?
Awards
Comments on "Stalker"
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On Wednesday, June 23, 2004, Railway_Butterfly
(353) wrote:
I actually really like this...the flow is excellent and as capt mentioned..the detail was just...well,great.Scary as hell but great :)..Cara..xxx...
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A former member wrote:
This is very good, considering all has happened to me but he ended up in jail...my uncle came over unexpectedly...I can see what your seeing in this...I like this a lot~~~chance
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On Sunday, April 25, 2004, so_skeevy
(64) wrote:
holy shit that was awesome. Scary. But awesome.
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On Saturday, April 17, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
yeah ... thought so ... this is the one that scared me off in the first place ...lol ... the methodical pacing , and perfect rythm .., the details , the inner turmoil of the conclusion ... all supported a truth in the pieces confession .. like this is wha
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On Saturday, April 17, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
what you'd send to the newspapers ... to make sure you were understood , and properly appreciated ... heavy stuff man ... funguy
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On Saturday, January 10, 2004, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
makes my skin crawl, , , , ,O.
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On Friday, January 9, 2004, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
This my freind, is creepy as hell. At the same time, you've delved right into the innocense of "the" stalkers plight. The ending stanza, brings warmth into this story...and a bit of sympathy for the killer. Amazing work. ~JMDW~
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On Sunday, January 11, 2004, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...always glad to creep someone out...thanks, by the way...
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A former member wrote:
DAMN....this was fucking awesome....great flow...i stayed curious through it all....well written...I have wanted to do the same but under different circumstances....great
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On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, Juggalotus
(69) wrote:
Stalkers of the night.It's too bad that the only people you notice in intimate ways tend to be the ones who don't seem to notice you.the sweet irony of society.
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On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...you capture the mood of my poetry oh so well...*evil laugh*
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A former member wrote:
Ack! I missed this one too? *slaps hand* Bad Fawn. This was amazing. This tale unfolded with just the right amount of suspense. And the ending was wonderful!
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A former member wrote:
Oh...and no stalking like that, okay? It only leads to badness :)
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On Friday, September 26, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets
(55) wrote:
damn very nice piece, so intense and filled with emotions happiness,pleasure,sorrow all piled into to one interesting write,thanks for sharing
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A former member wrote:
I can indentify with the beginning cause I'll admit I've stalked people on occasion... but yeah... I fell madly in love with my prey and I think the feeling's kinda mutual, so the end of this isn't as easy for me to grasp. Great write tho. *grins*
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On Sunday, September 21, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Evil shit man...
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On Sunday, September 14, 2003, silverwolf
(20) wrote:
oooooh, spooky! i like! damn do i like the catch-22-like ones. keep it up! *wolf*