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when the moon met the sun.
By Star
now as the moon kissed
the sun goodnight.
he said unto her
"don't you cry,
I've gathered your tears
and laid them down around me.
and I've called them stars."
as they shine bright as your eyes,
so, I'm not so alone
in the darkness.
and I'll love you
Until Summer becomes
cold.
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On Friday, May 9, 2014, Lux
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wrote:
To be loved in such a manner... It seems I will ever be envious of the moon. Her tears are gorgeous though, so I must remember to thank her for them. An excellently wrought poem.
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On Monday, March 3, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
"and I'll love you Until Summer becomes cold." - lovely imagery throughout! Ciao, T/S
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On Tuesday, February 25, 2014, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
Gorgeously poetic. ...and the Goddess fell in love with The Star. .kisses.
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A former member wrote:
Absolutely love this piece. As stated before in another comment, very gentle and beautiful. Had an excellent visual on this one and thank you for that.
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On Monday, February 24, 2014, SickSanityJenn
(250) wrote:
i agree... this is beautiful. i love it. the way it flows sweetly
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A former member wrote:
a blanket of tears that fall and give light and hope... how fitting. i love it.
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On Monday, February 24, 2014, Melankolia
(46) wrote:
Beautiful. :)
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