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Another Feeble Outlook
By Strataic
'Sequin sentient-
Simmer, silently in sanction'
Voices trying to tell,
Me..
Through whisker whispers
And tea towel speeches.
--It's difficult now
To feel,
Too Far-
Happy--
Negatives swarm
Biologically,
Mentally--
I'm childish sometimes,
Dreaming, I was--
Gone.
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Copyright 2013 Cipher
Published on Wednesday, October 23, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Another Feeble Outlook"
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A former member wrote:
Knowing what's "childish" is key... as always your an amazing poet my friend... here's to wishing you all the best...
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On Wednesday, October 23, 2013, megaprime81
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wrote:
Wow! Powerful work. The ending has a real punch to it that I wasn't expecting. 10.
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On Wednesday, October 23, 2013, Star
(920) wrote:
"tea towel speechless, it's difficult now. To feel. To far happy." You're an amazing writing and you always seize to surprise me whenever I read a new post.
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On Wednesday, October 23, 2013, Maladroit
(202) wrote:
Something about "tea towel speeches" made my morning sun shine brighter... I want to use it 7 times for all the poetry crumbs in my notebook. I tend, I think, to get caught up...
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