kiss me in the rain (we have no worries)

By heroineyes

i get up in the morning
get dressed and look
out through the rush-
hour smog of the city.

have a cigarette with
my morning cup of coffee,
wake up and feel truly
self destructive.

smoke and drink my world
away cause what our politicians
say won't answer all my questions.

so shut my mouth
and close my eyes

everyone's dancing
and it's raining all the while.

it's kinda like a dream,
but i felt i had more control.

falling from the sky,
or maybe the sky
was falling on me;

nevertheless,

i'm just glad i woke up.

alone beneath the stars
with everything i fear'
i'm jealous of the moon tonight
(as you get to see Her).

nevertheless,

the worries aren't very important.

i'll cradle You in my arms
(for love is small and very frail).

everytime i look at the stars
i know we aren't far apart.

and i'm glad i woke up
or i might have missed You.

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Published on Friday, September 12, 2008. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "kiss me in the rain (we have no worries) "

On Monday, December 18, 2017, Cassette (1144) wrote:

"alone beneath the stars with everything i fear'" ...wow....
A former member wrote: Wow... lovely write. "alone beneath the stars, with everything I fear". I know that feeling all to well. Loved this! =)
On Monday, December 18, 2017, Cassette (1144) wrote:

oh... didn't know I echoed this comment. but I guess that just reinforces the sentiment.
On Tuesday, September 23, 2008, disposable (105) wrote:

im jealous of the moon and your muse. obviously a romatic is always appreciated but intelligence to boot?! sigh....
On Monday, September 15, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (359) wrote:

Ventured back to this piece to place a comment I should have upon my first reading. other than the cigarettes and coffee, this poem is very descriptive of my days here... Well written
On Saturday, September 13, 2008, The Lipstick Factor (290) wrote:

Lovely, lovely write, I really like the stanza about the falling sky. Very eloquent work.
A former member wrote: This is one of the best pieces I have ever read on here. It speaks with such clarity. Even the imagery is so very vivid. It must be some wonderful, enchanting love you feel because it is evident the inspiration must have been born of a gorgeous muse for there is substance here not found in others one's heart finds ordinary. This is grace incarnate and not only a tribute, but an admirable testament of love. Thank you. I find this humbling. Much Respect.
On Saturday, September 13, 2008, heroineyes (113) wrote:

well, thank rhys (Jess, the Goddess) for allowing such a write...not me
On Saturday, September 13, 2008, Rhys Ki (68) wrote:

God, Darling, this is beautiful. It makes me feel so loved... I feel quite the same, Dearest. A wonderful write.
On Friday, September 12, 2008, TropicalSnowstorm (1703) wrote:

"everytime i look at the stars i know we aren't far apart. and i'm glad i woke up or i might have missed You." - I've definitely felt that. Great piece! Ciao, T/S