...Visceral Agony

By SolApathy

Agony in the moments within moments
Flow through the visceral thoughts of peril
Injustice in the soulless pain of the impaled
I smile wickedly through the veil
~The Division bell rings~
Suffering assails your mind
You know I’ll take my time
 I am the bitterness of a savage grind
Wearing you down one memory at a time
I drive in the damnation
You scream for a reprise
I smell the blood of your souls’ soon
Prying into the dark spaces
I seek the little lights you hide
I strive to corrupt what little is left

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Published on Friday, July 14, 2017.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

...10 minute demise...I am the emptiness of a life with no prize...
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  • worm On Saturday, July 15, 2017, worm (1289)By person wrote:

    a very good poem! I could feel the joyous desperation in this piece... Kudos! ~worm~

  • Devil lyn On Saturday, July 15, 2017, Devil lyn (380)By person wrote:

    I heard Pink Floyd deep and faded in the background of this obscure & vivid write; as always, you bring the lament of darkness into light ...

  • Purposelessness On Saturday, July 15, 2017, Purposelessness (165)By person wrote:

    I always love reading your work. This did not disappoint. I really liked how you ended it from "prying into the dark spaces". So good.

  • Anna McCarra On Friday, July 14, 2017, Anna McCarra (405)By person wrote:

    This feels like depression described as a ghostly beast, that is haunting you. Darkly creative. Scholar

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