when the sun is covered by the clouds

By shortandpretentious

when the sun is covered by the clouds
the world freezes and holds its breath
a blue tint washes over everything
the smoke from a cigarette
lingers uncertainly
before vanishing into the calm unknown
eyes drift upwards and scan the sky
with silent/unrealistic hopes
the world can stay like this forever;
but the sun cannot be contained
the blue is gone
as is the calm
replaced by an infinite number
of kamikaze photons
intent on halting complacence/
on showing the world
what it's really like

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Copyright 2004 shortandpretentious
Published on Sunday, May 16, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Sunday, January 14, 2018, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Lovely, contemplative feel and tone. Wonderful poetics and well deserved POTD.

  • A former member wrote: such a fascinating use of language and bizarre flow that was somehow so organic and otherworldly at once. a marvel. the message resonated with me deeply as well.

  • Star On Tuesday, November 11, 2014, Star (879)By person wrote:

    Why haven't I read this before? 10/10

  • -Oz- On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, -Oz- (131)By person wrote:

    i often have thoughts resembling these, and i think you put into words what i have been attempting to for months, thankx for sharing -Oz-

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