when the sun is covered by the clouds
By shortandpretentious
when the sun is covered by the clouds
the world freezes and holds its breath
a blue tint washes over everything
the smoke from a cigarette
lingers uncertainly
before vanishing into the calm unknown
eyes drift upwards and scan the sky
with silent/unrealistic hopes
the world can stay like this forever;
but the sun cannot be contained
the blue is gone
as is the calm
replaced by an infinite number
of kamikaze photons
intent on halting complacence/
on showing the world
what it's really like
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Copyright 2004 shortandpretentious
Published on Sunday, May 16, 2004.
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On Sunday, January 14, 2018, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Lovely, contemplative feel and tone. Wonderful poetics and well deserved POTD.
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A former member wrote:
such a fascinating use of language and bizarre flow that was somehow so organic and otherworldly at once. a marvel. the message resonated with me deeply as well.
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On Tuesday, November 11, 2014, Star
(879) wrote:
Why haven't I read this before? 10/10
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On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, -Oz-
(131) wrote:
i often have thoughts resembling these, and i think you put into words what i have been attempting to for months, thankx for sharing -Oz-