A Timid Goodnight

By lupus tenebrae





You flicker as
an unfamiliar
silhouette

then tease my
empty spectrum
with a kettle
and a timid way
of call-

ing coffee black.
I sigh, but play along;
your curves yet 
bidding me

goodnight.

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Copyright 2013 lupus tenebrae
Published on Sunday, October 13, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

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  • A former member wrote: I have thus frustration every night too. LOL

  • A former member wrote: The beauty of marriage

  • DarkDruidess On Monday, January 13, 2014, DarkDruidess (313)By person wrote:

    perfect little snapshot...well done.

  • Numbers Peppelini On Monday, January 13, 2014, Numbers Peppelini (74)By person wrote:

    Succinct lucid drizzle from an artist's palette enamoring magically a dancer in the light to a once empty canvass....Bravo!

  • dwells On Friday, November 15, 2013, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    That coffee will not let you sleep, but then maybe it was a very good night too, cheers Wolfie!

  • Star On Tuesday, November 12, 2013, Star (879)By person wrote:

    the picture you told in this made my mind go in a hundred different places. As they said, "a picture holds a thousand words". Beautiful piece, lupus. (:

  • Maladroit On Tuesday, November 12, 2013, Maladroit (198)By person wrote:

    I need a thesaurus for the word "beautiful" - and I'll echo "tender". You are a poet to admire, no doubt. I'm glad this was featured so I wouldn't miss it. This jump started my day.

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Sunday, October 13, 2013, Spiritus_Frumenti (340)By person wrote:

    a brief yet tender image....

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