Comments by Numbers Peppelini
- "A most cogent and forceful write, that spirals down from some past tense. A heart both forlorn and forsaken . I dare say it is beautifully received. Much like the concerto of a sad violin. "
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Falling" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "Interesting and reflective to me, though through its subtleties and not its surrender and lust. For what part of me shall I ever be willing to handover to someone, that holds not a permanent place by a cozy fire. To what in me can not I not find beauty and love, that I shall become a beggar to some other, who may not ever have stopped to witness a beautiful sunset? Might I linger to chance each moment as a king, building my own castles or merely risk renting a tiny place inside dying souls? I sincerely with all due respect reflect to where I am in this very interesting piece. Thank you so very much. "
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Denying Addiction" by SickSanityJenn
- "There must be the tragedies, to which we call love. With all of its pain, its sorrow, its hurt and longing. For what should have always been, becomes nothing more than the flickering dying death committed to some kind of frightening decadence, It is perhaps the most unquenchable thirst for passion that we yearn so much to hold onto at any cost. We will cling with intrepid abandon, like the wild coyote who spills his foggy breath to the sky with its craving . The hungering poet that is lost in us, whose vibrant quill can no longer touch its mark, to reach the end of a sonnet.......I see the poet in you rise up through your most genuine transference .
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Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "My Lover" by SickSanityJenn
- "Misfortune through the tempt towards a fools gold. It is this ill fate, that frightens me more than any demon, any tragedy, any imminent danger thrust at the chafe of a sword,
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Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Fortuna!" by FadedBlues
- "Very hot and steamy write...The way it reads, there is just enough, subtleness in it to make it provoking. I almost felt as if I was living in a "Lolita" scene, you know, hot sweltering day, driving up to some old desolate motel, wiping the gritty dust from from my neck with a handkerchief, while "Lolita playfully waited in the doorway for me, swiping the sweat off her ice cream cone, with delicious lashing licks of promise, like crushed velvet against her form.....While symphonies of bliss play in the halls. Bravo young lady!!!"
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Crescendo Me" by poe_lover28
- "Superbly written essay, if you will, that gives one the feeling they are sitting side by side with the writer listening attentively. Yet the write never speaks what it is in silence he is trying to escape. Interesting to me , beyond the conceptual word. There is so much to explore inside this piece, "
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "when the sun goes down" by Sketso
- "Magnificent retelling of a tragedy, that caused even the devil to turn his head. It never roams far from me the sad refrain of both violin and cello, that cry during and in the aftermath of sorrow and regret. FadedBlues, you've outdone yourself again if that is at all possible."
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Violins at Dawn" by FadedBlues
- "What is the meaning to that which is left when we come to realize, perhaps much too late, we were merely just two parallels, that never really had a chance of coming together? I suppose it is meant, we stay as close as we can, together, beneath......r a i n"
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Beneath...r a i n" by poe_lover28
- "Nice candid write.... Writing poetry is the saving grace to all our relationships, isn't it? It is the only relationship where we get to greet one another again as if the first time....."
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Problem Child" by megaprime81
- "You have a unique way of emptying the excess one carries.....Tell me no lies , you have a life time of love poems in you each and everyday that go to their graves perhaps, for no better reason, than to have one resonate among us now....Am I lying?"
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "love me like a poem" by FadedBlues
- "I want to thank you for such a somber baring of the soul..... Forgiveness came to mind, after I finished reading it. Will you ever be able to forgive? They say, if you can not, you will never be able to move on. But you have already forgiven him. You see somewhere between when you were born and the time he pulled his magician trick and disappeared. He held a knife to his throat not seeing the beauty in his new born baby...And while he faked it
singing goo goo and ga ga , you would cry hysterically in his arms for the trouble you had caused him... to want to push a cold silver blade across his neck. It's called paternal hostage I guess. Thanks once again Lupus"
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "Dear Father" by lupus tenebrae
- "The teller see's beyond his seeming, setting the reality of all things apart from its mere description. I love how he lets us hang to his coat tails, in order to show us the universe and beyond perhaps! Yet cleverly, takes us home in his last two lines...That there is the universe is inside each of us, if we are willing not to define it."
Posted by Numbers Peppelini on "sine nomine" by FadedBlues
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