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Setting Myself Free
By Nehema
Encased in this vacant prison
Agonizing
Fists hurting
From pounding and clawing
The walls run red with my blood
Adrenaline
Heart racing
Fear shredding
My soul apart
Searing
Pain in my head
Can't concentrate
I've forgotten who I am
Why I'm here
Scorching
Throat on fire
Screaming and shouting
Trying
to be heard
Aching
All over my body
Muscles throbbing from overlong stress
Too much fighting......
I CAN'T MAINTAIN THIS ARTIFICIAL LIFE
Time to give in
Relax
Let the murky water envelop me
In merciful
darkness
Death
Leads to rebirth
Renewel of the Soul
Replenish what was lost
Start anew
Rekindle that lost love for life
ABSOLUTION IS MINE
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Copyright 2012 Robyn Layne
Published on Wednesday, June 20, 2012.
Filed under: "Philosophical" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Setting Myself Free"
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A former member wrote:
i like your comment "...only recently gained the courage to correct my position in life..."...so true. It is ours to create, ours to shape. Takes great courage to do so, alot of soul searching and deep looking. Lovely.
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On Friday, August 31, 2012, Nehema
(959)
wrote:
I actually wrote this 8 years ago and only recently gained the courage to correct my position in life. Thanks to a lot of the support I've received from friends here on DP, I know I will make it. Your voices make a huge difference, you should all know that - thanks - XXOO
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A former member wrote:
Emotional storm brewing,, Awesome write hun
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A former member wrote:
lot of emotions i enjoyed it, thank you
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A former member wrote:
You suggested that I read this don't know how I forgot I already did! Just as awesome as the first time I read it! Once again ALL HAIL ROBYN so talented babe! Really love this one!
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A former member wrote:
Love this work Robyn. You have such a great range when it comes to poem's. GOOD JOB 345
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A former member wrote:
All hail Robyn! I'm speechless... so good words couldn't say. Awesome write!
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A former member wrote:
Love this poem, u inspire me robyn!
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On Thursday, June 21, 2012, Nehema
(959) wrote:
Thanks Nar, you do the same for me ;)
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On Wednesday, June 20, 2012, Invisible Girl
(134) wrote:
"I can't maintain this artificial life" it is exhausting, yes? Loved reading this
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A former member wrote:
i got inspiration from u i luv u poem
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On Wednesday, June 20, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
NOt so sure your freedom will be to your liking, otherwise why all the trials and tribulations beforehand, when we could just take the shortcut, but for fear of the unknown? Anyway, you belong to us now so suck it up Robyn, this was fine as all your stuff always is (and you too)!
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On Thursday, June 21, 2012, Nehema
(959) wrote:
I love you dwells, this prison I'm breaking out of is one of my own building. I spent the last 15 years building it because I was scared of my identity. No longer afraid, I'm ready to face the world on my terms. I appreciate your support & your work gives me strength, as well as others here - XXOO
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A former member wrote:
Wow, the picture this paints.... just remarkable. great work, so wonderfully dark yet hopeful.
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On Wednesday, June 20, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(611) wrote:
awesome, Robyn. I can feel you loud and clear here. Cool. Til next time -
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On Wednesday, June 20, 2012, FadedBlues
(2168) wrote:
...desperation can be an enemy or an ally, I think. it can lead to your downfall or force you into correcting your position. this is strong, the title being that which we all want to achieve...
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On Wednesday, June 20, 2012, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
FUCK YES!!!!!!!!!!!!1 fuck yes yes yes !!!! Baby i love you ..
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