i want head

By elisa

i always search for a dick
on a jealous bitch
and never fail to find one

i believe there is a difference
between a righteous homosexual
and a closet faggot

by the by

...bludgeon to death
by a sugary tongue
is how i want to go

sanity has no appeal to me
i won't settle for mediocrity
i lust to be so fucking crazy in love
i rage with hate
seething with a constant threat to kill-

a significant other, game
for a worthy challenge

his back facing
loose lips
that drip quick
from a war torn pussy

a contender ready to
leave the younglings to play, mine games
an ass slap past puberty
and a tantrum away from reality







i want the head
of prince charming
mounted on my mantle

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Copyright 2011 elisa
Published on Monday, June 19, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, December 26, 2017, carlosjackal (2466)By person wrote:

    Now I'm horny, damnit! ;D This rocks hard.

  • Sasha_Revengy On Sunday, October 11, 2015, Sasha_Revengy (61)By person wrote:

    This was...awesome. Mannnn!

  • Im All Alone On Thursday, August 1, 2013, Im All Alone (84)By person wrote:

    That's Is A Good Poem,, Good Gurl..

  • haunted On Sunday, November 25, 2012, haunted (1202)By person wrote:

    wow thats awesome. thats some hard core stuff. i think you'd make a great dominatrix! beautiful elisa!

  • Star On Thursday, July 19, 2012, Star (1268)By person wrote:

    WOW fuckkng awesome I love this......great fuckkng write!!! :D

  • Devilish On Thursday, July 19, 2012, Devilish (3784)By person wrote:

    I read this everytime I log in. It gets me motivated and I whore it as often as I can. Everyone must read the lyrical havoc in poetic perfection you bring. I wanna eat you . Scholar

  • moinees On Friday, December 21, 2012, moinees (44)By person wrote:

    Thanks for this incredible share Dev! Now this, is something, i could DEF read everyday.

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Thursday, July 19, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (332)By person wrote:

    FInd him & take him down (in more ways than one)! Love it!

  • poetbradley On Wednesday, July 4, 2012, poetbradley (75)By person wrote:

    that was awesome,looking forward to read more of your works , you rocked it

  • Devilish On Wednesday, June 27, 2012, Devilish (3784)By person wrote:

    FUCK YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mutha fucker you are a bad woman! a master word artist. "Bows" Scholar

  • DarkGothicVampireFreak On Monday, March 14, 2011, DarkGothicVampireFreak (16)By person wrote:

    this is so amazing

  • Crush_With_Eyeliner On Friday, October 15, 2010, Crush_With_Eyeliner (51)By person wrote:

    I know it sounds trite but "game for a worthy challenge" was the one that really got me. That shift in Dynamic/Power....push and pull....you're making me blush.

  • Zyrnuvex On Tuesday, June 22, 2010, Zyrnuvex (49)By person wrote:

    I really like the way this starts out sounding sexual. Excellent depiction of the abusive of love to gain carnal pleasure. Ending well with how it can make one feel.

  • zanewill On Thursday, February 15, 2007, zanewill (84)By person wrote:

    elisa UR fucking awesome

  • A former member wrote: This was intense! I can't even begin to articulate what a trip this was. ....-samone

  • A former member wrote: This is my favorite line "...bludgeon to death by a sugary tongue is how i want to go"

  • Dissolving Poet On Tuesday, July 4, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    HAHAH your charming I love ya! This was incredible remind me to never ever piss you off I'll stay on your good side *steps away slowly* ~nightly

  • sixsixnine On Monday, July 3, 2006, sixsixnine (486)By person wrote:

    fucking brutal! love the punishing feel to this. *669*

  • A former member wrote: lusting indeeed. I want a new love.

  • A former member wrote: oh my gooood i love you.

  • A former member wrote: yes...the ending is brilliant!!!

  • elisa On Wednesday, June 21, 2006, elisa (1640)By person wrote:

    *smiles*.....this was pretty much of a mind vomit....until i got to the end... then i was satisfied...thx you much:)

  • NikesRain On Wednesday, June 21, 2006, NikesRain (1341)By person wrote:

    you're mind is as sexy as the rest of you.... gripping, thought stabbing write and loved the ending...

  • elisa On Wednesday, June 21, 2006, elisa (1640)By person wrote:

    *sigh*... you made my night.....

  • NikesRain On Wednesday, June 21, 2006, NikesRain (1341)By person wrote:

    *huge hugs* you rock my brain in such a sexy way ;)

  • veingo On Tuesday, June 20, 2006, veingo (556)By person wrote:

    OMG, I want to drink your brain. ^V^

  • TaintedButterfly On Tuesday, June 20, 2006, TaintedButterfly (675)By person wrote:

    Talk about "head" and they all cum a running, how ironic, haha. Elisa you're brilliant. Did I say, you're brilliant? Awesome m'dear. ;) Julia~

  • kiss of the dark On Monday, June 19, 2006, kiss of the dark (32)By person wrote:

    sweetness on a bun....good write

  • PoeticHellion On Monday, June 19, 2006, PoeticHellion (192)By person wrote:

    Wow. This is fabulous. I love it.

  • A former member wrote: Holy fuck me running. I can't touch this so I won't. But fantastic. ~Ryan

  • elisa On Monday, June 19, 2006, elisa (1640)By person wrote:

    c'mon touch it.... TOUCH IT! ;)

  • Exodus On Monday, June 19, 2006, Exodus (178)By person wrote:

    Wow. It is rare for me to find such genius in the simple works of others and I find much frustrated honesty in yours. I loved this.

  • elisa On Monday, June 19, 2006, elisa (1640)By person wrote:

    i aim to please :P

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