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Raining Stars
By carlosjackal
There’s a hole in my ceiling
Where the rain falls in
Each drop
Carries a spark
And when there’s a crash
Such a mighty crash
Those raindrops
Have carried a star
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© 2021 Carl Denyer
Published on Thursday, March 26, 2009.
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A former member wrote:
I can definitely see why you get so many Poems Of The Day. This is short, but no less beautiful and powerful. Two very beautiful things combined into a nice visual. Queen Reb:).
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A former member wrote:
I love the depth. It was beautiful
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A former member wrote:
Short and beautiful. I love it.
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On Tuesday, August 2, 2011, Alchemist
(688)
wrote:
WOW, the last line hit like a ton of bricks, such a great piece in so few words.
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On Wednesday, May 25, 2011, The Lipstick Factor
(290) wrote:
Lovely, simple, powerful. Everything a poem should be.
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A former member wrote:
Wow, it was so short and simple, yet so beautiful and complex. It was magnificently beautiful.
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On Friday, January 14, 2011, ubiquitoussoul
(346) wrote:
im.pressive.. just a massive scene you've quietly erupted..slightly pensive..under dark light..surrounds thunder whence rain asunder creates wonder..
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On Friday, January 14, 2011, Corinthian
(309) wrote:
oh wow ..::sighs:: tranquil so pretty
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A former member wrote:
Such a voice...
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On Thursday, March 26, 2009, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Still gets me.
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On Friday, March 27, 2009, blue
(1454) wrote:
you can.. be gotten? well then..
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