Raining Stars

By carlosjackal

There’s a hole in my ceiling
Where the rain falls in
Each drop
Carries a spark
And when there’s a crash
Such a mighty crash
Those raindrops
Have carried a star

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© 2021 Carl Denyer
Published on Thursday, March 26, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I can definitely see why you get so many Poems Of The Day. This is short, but no less beautiful and powerful. Two very beautiful things combined into a nice visual. Queen Reb:).

  • A former member wrote: I love the depth. It was beautiful

  • A former member wrote: Short and beautiful. I love it.

  • Alchemist On Tuesday, August 2, 2011, Alchemist (688)By person wrote:

    WOW, the last line hit like a ton of bricks, such a great piece in so few words.

  • The Lipstick Factor On Wednesday, May 25, 2011, The Lipstick Factor (290)By person wrote:

    Lovely, simple, powerful. Everything a poem should be.

  • A former member wrote: Wow, it was so short and simple, yet so beautiful and complex. It was magnificently beautiful.

  • ubiquitoussoul On Friday, January 14, 2011, ubiquitoussoul (346)By person wrote:

    im.pressive.. just a massive scene you've quietly erupted..slightly pensive..under dark light..surrounds thunder whence rain asunder creates wonder..

  • Corinthian On Friday, January 14, 2011, Corinthian (309)By person wrote:

    oh wow ..::sighs:: tranquil so pretty

  • A former member wrote: Such a voice...

  • Alanarchy On Thursday, March 26, 2009, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    Still gets me.

  • blue On Friday, March 27, 2009, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    you can.. be gotten? well then..

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