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Save Me from Myself
By SilentStalker
My worst enemy I've become
The hate in me has grown
My demons
are destroying me
And everything I've known
The rage
I placed inside of me
Has stole away my hope
I'm breaking
slowly everyday
I don't think I can cope
I need you
now to show me love
To help me ease this pain
And help me
heal my heart before
I drive myself insane
I plead
you to be there for me
My pain has grown too strong
Please
save me from myself, my love
I may not last for long...
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Copyright 2003 Darun Ferguson
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
Dark, beautiful and intense. Great writing here.
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A former member wrote:
What a great and powerful piece!.. I can relate to those feelings very well.. The worst enemy is ourselves.. :(
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A former member wrote:
Its as if your are writing about me. Your poem is frightening and intense. I feel it deep down. You are my inspiration. Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful..
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A former member wrote:
"I may not last for long."
I love it.
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A former member wrote:
Two thumbs up.
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On Tuesday, November 2, 2010, Dommi
(96)
wrote:
i'm feeling this..
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On Saturday, February 27, 2010, Musik2MyEyes
(193) wrote:
Wow...did you write this or did I? I felt most of it. But I don't look for love to heal me. It just doesn't work that way. But this was an awesome piece.
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A former member wrote:
there is a painful darkness in all of us and youve tapped right into it. good job it really hits home
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On Saturday, October 3, 2009, Ashteroth
(192) wrote:
Yeah that feeling sucks esp the breaking everyday part. Enjoyed the read ~Ash
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On Tuesday, February 20, 2007, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
Right now I'm slowly losing my mind and everyday it becomes more and more, insomnia and etc, and its all just become a battle, this eased it just for a little while to read it in someone elses words. ~Mirrored Nymph
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On Tuesday, February 20, 2007, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
Bleh this made me cry.. Right now more then anything this poem seems like a crutch to me, I can relate to it and I know exactly the feeling,*sigh* I just hope it gets easier to bare, the burdens and insane tendencies of life.
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On Tuesday, November 21, 2006, The Shattered Heart
(32) wrote:
Yeah yeah, it's late but never later than never. Love it.
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On Monday, March 21, 2005, Sin
(1168) wrote:
so desperate and full of longing...a very touching write...i guess your not all blood and axes ~kristy
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On Friday, May 14, 2004, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
This is touching. This shows yet again, to those of who, who feel as though they're out there alone .. that there are people who feel just like them .. its strange .. how similiar us mans are. Excellent Write. [D&A] P.S: that was .. unscary.
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On Saturday, October 11, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
your best friend will always be your worst enemy+Fallen One+
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A former member wrote:
And that's kinda scarry... Wonderful work (again...) *Lilith*
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On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
whoa, such a retreat from the blood and gore, self realization is a tough thing especially when you realize that...
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On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
you've become somebody you dont like -kRYz
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On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...glad you saw it for what I wrote it for...I don't feel love the way I used to before...like the poetry I showed Fawn...I just can't do that anymore...
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On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...it gets to the point that I start to believe that someone has to show me how to love again...but maybe I'd stop writing like this, then...
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On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...though that may be a good thing, too...who knows...? I'm myself, and FAR from losing my own battle...I'll stop now; I'm rambling...
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On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, Delilah
(113) wrote:
This is one of my fav's of yours...I know this feeling well...I love this...so much so it's going to my favorites..thank you. ~Delilah~
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On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
Would you believe I was listening to Evanescence when I wrote this...crazy, huh?
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On Sunday, October 26, 2003, Delilah
(113) wrote:
No...not crazy at all...a lot of the times I write, I'm listening to some form of music. Music brings certain emotions out of me that no other thing can...~Delilah~
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On Monday, October 6, 2003, yslehc
(334) wrote:
very good, i can relate to that also
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On Monday, October 6, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets
(55) wrote:
very nice, its so hard when your worst enemy is yourself,thanks for sharing
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A former member wrote:
Hmm...I relate to this one. After you've been hurt so many times you put up a wall to block the pain. And that wall slowly drives you insane because it also keeps out everything else.
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A former member wrote:
*big hugs*
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